BShady ft. Geno - Inside The Locked Sector

[J.R.]

*Puts in sig* time for some feed.

[J.R.]

Thanks so much for the praise. I try sO hard it means alot

[Ka0t1c]

geno

following me is just where you oughta be,
Our comradery will be honoured because we are a team,
The illuminati's a product we can get to harvesting,
For farther dreams that you know that you have been wanting, B.
But just stop and see the world around you, not alotta green,
But with my fathering you will most surely venture an odyssey,
Just talk to me, and give me just a little bit of hope,
That our bartering will be the trick to get us all the gold,
'Cause together we will soar, all the way up to the top,
Ain't no way that you could fall because your soul is worth it all,
Creating picture perfect song


bshady

I wouldn't join you you little devilish fuck if you were my mother,
A team? Only force I'm with is the spirit of god that hovers!
I don't harvest crops, I eat the finished shelved product
Illuminati was thrown out, for containing wealth and being lawless.
Fuck Green, All I see is red "B" And I would rather bleed,
then ever have been seen as a fucking puppet Illuminati seed!

you two started off very strong, but some reason after these parts, it seemed lackluster, keep trying to rewrite those a couple times, i think it would turn out better

[J.R.]

If anyone is wondering, (Not bragging, just saying)

I master my flow by reading it in three rappers prime flows.

Eminem (TES), dre (Chronic), Royce (DIC)

[WakeUpShow]

wow. Geno, your verse and last mini-verse in the back-n-forth were incredible. They flowed amazingly to the beat and I could imagine the Pill voice from My Darling saying it perfectly. All of the words you used were placed perfectly and sounded like they should be there. The only thing that wasn't fantastic was your rhyming but that doesn't take away from it because the rest is high-quality and it's a theme piece anyway.

B. I really didn't like your verses to be honest. They were sooo repetitive. You just kept saying FUCK MAINSTREAM and I'D RATHER DO THIS AND THAT. It was angering by the end. You have to be versatile. Your flow was choppy and your rhyming was simple. I'm not trying to be a dick but you really need to work on it.

[J.R.]

Thanks cream, it was fun to write too