Aim For The Throne

[Atone]

(Verse)
I'm so sick how pain feel's, cryin over lame deals
i'm done sheddin the same tears
time to switch up the frame here
switchin the lane and i change gears
won't let the heartbreak and shame steal
i'm gonna keep on my path in the game no training wheel's
catch me ridin thru the storm breakin away from curses
i speak my mind when i'm writin these verses
everything from the bottom of my heart i bring to the surface
that bitch left me with shattered dreams
a broken heart with scattered screams
she aint nothin but a shadow i left behind
no lookin back i don't have the time
i got dreams to chase and hope to find
and i won't let anything take me off the grind
can't steal my light- i got to shine
so til i'm gone i'm gonna walk the line

(Chorus)
You aint gonna stop me, you aint gonna take me down
you aint gonna hold me, i'm comin to chase the crown
i start from the bottom and make my way to the top
i'm a soldier in the battle, aint no way i'm gonna stop
i aim for the throne i'm gonna take the spot

(Verse)
I used to drink til there was nothin left in the cup
empty glasses and i couldn't give a fuck
had me thinkin- god dammit this sucks
sittin here in this apartment waitin for the end
family miles away, i was all outta friends
went for walks by the highway thinkin about life
remisicin on my past and thinkin it would be nice
if i could go back, and maybe make a few changes
but then i realised, history is why i became this
i shouldn't dwell on how bad the pain is
i should learn and see what i can gain with
these lessons that come, and i gotta remain this
cuz what didn't kill me is what made me stronger
those hard times gave me somethin to hold on to
and now when i ask why i'm livin i can count a hundred reasons
so i stand up, and face my demons
up on the rocks you can hear me screamin

(Chorus)

(Verse)
You can say i aint doin it right, but at the end of the night
when i pick up the pen to write and speak of this life
bring heat to the mic, and i tell you what it's like
i aint tryin to make a catchy radio track
i'm writin for me, cuz i got so many things stacked
i can't hold back, cuz sometimes i feel so trapped
i go on the attack, and put it all on the paper
throw it on a beat with a message to haters
you don't know me, so why the fuckin are you judgin
this music is who i am, so weather you hate it or love it
i aint budgin, cuz for me it's all or nothin
and this is my chance to turn it into somethin
so i continue to bust em, end of discussion
there's now way i'm gonna let go
i'm set, ready to blow
get deadly and show
i'm rock steady- just know
this is what i do, this is who i am
so haters keep talkin, i don't give a damn

(Chorus)





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[mdemaz]

Same old quality man...Bro, you gotta spend some cash man..Just get a device that can convert professional analog mics into digital with usb etc., m-audio and all that..Pretty cheap nowadays, go to your local music shop in the city.

You don't need to torture yourself anymore considering you're producing beats now.
Stay on the bars man, don't rap over the bars, have a small pause at the kick, so it sounds more organized.

Anyway, later bro.

[Atone]

Same old quality man...Bro, you gotta spend some cash man..Just get a device that can convert professional analog mics into digital with usb etc., m-audio and all that..Pretty cheap nowadays, go to your local music shop in the city.

You don't need to torture yourself anymore considering you're producing beats now.
Stay on the bars man, don't rap over the bars, have a small pause at the kick, so it sounds more organized.

Anyway, later bro.

LMAO, you didn't even look at the post did you, how are you critiqing vocals? there is no vocals dude it's just me writing shit

[mdemaz]

Oh shit, I posted in the wrong thread, I seriously dunno what the fuck I'm doing, it's like 8 PM and I'm tired..
As for the lyrics, good looks.

[Sam.]

Have to admit man ,lyrically your flawless .Excellent work.The way you managed to say what you wanted to say while maintaining the multis was awesome.I must also say that concept flowed magnificently .

Good drop man .