Room in the Game?

by **Mr.DGAF** » Sep 21st, '11, 21:57

Started this verse a while ago, then I kinda forgot about it. Just now finished it.

I’m feeling manically depressed, and on top of that he’s stressed
I keep planning for the best, but it just comes off as obsessed
Well excuse me, I just jest, but some truth spills from my chest
Because for you I lack respect, checked your rep and then collect
A couple notes just for my hopes, don’t want to gloat, but I’m not broke
Instead of sink I’d rather float, grab some rope and climb that hoe
Now-a-days I just don’t know, I still do try but then what for?
Is there some room inside this sport? If I can work and get support
Can I earn what I deserve, then I can serve all of the nerds with some words
Of inspiration, renovating, innovating while you hating
And debating on my greatness, well then make this
Zero fakeness in this place it’s, hardly easy
Call and tease me, all to freeze me from my needs see,
This ain’t breezy, I work hard but you don’t see me
Pulling strings and being peachy, but you can never really free me
From this prison that is rap, fuck this crap, I think I’m leaving

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by **RainMan44** » Sep 24th, '11, 06:58

Hmm, first off. I don't know if this is because I've been obsessively listening to Cole's new album or not....but I flowed this similarly to a flow he had on the album, can't remember which one exactly.

Now, this is dope. I REALLY, REALLY, REALLY think it flowed GREAT. Like the flow was flawless. The lyricism, great. I like the multies you incorporated in there, and even the lines that don't have them...no big deal. Contrary to what some people believe, you CAN make a good track with limited multies...and this one had substance/flow where multies lacked. (NOT saying you lacked multies...just saying the couple parts you didn't have them, they STILL resulted in dope lines :y: