Bars Of Sweet Sickness (B.O.S.S) Freestyle

[Atone]

(Verse)
I come thru with an attitude ready to fight
i got verses scarier than Freddy at night
grab the pen- hold it steady and tight
Whenever I write-
I'm kickin a flow with incredible hype
speak the truth like i'm protectin my rights
and what story you know thats better than life?
i don't need a gimmick- just a beat and i'm shreddin the mic
rip it apart like a beast to feast upon the opposition
decrease the competition- this means i got ambition
tellin me to give up music is like sayin i should be stopped from livin
you need to stop your bitchin
you say you don't see me goin to far but i got the vision
and you would hear it in the flow if you just stop and listen
as i drop the rythem, i got ya flippin when i rock the system
inside i'm stacked with passion and fire
on tracks rap with desire,
flow with a fashion maxed with a style
that you have to admire
cuz i lay it down sick
not one you wanna play around with
that would be as sharp as a round tip
cuz my rhymes sicker than average
i'm kickin and jabbin
got sick of the laughin
so i rip it and i smash em
and like a dick i stick it to u assholes
i'm all outta shits with no fucks to give
stuck with a middle finger up tellin ya to suck a dick
i know i'm such a prick,
and it's hard to witness
cuz my heart is missin
but it's art i'm givin
when i'm kickin these bars of sickness


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[JamaicanPattlez]

Great job man! A bit long-winded (But that's because I'm tired) but I like it. Awesome stuff.

[RainMan44]

Yo I like your use of multies, always a plus....also, this sounds like it hits hard. Good shit there


Not sure if this is a verse, free-verse or what...How many bars did you intend to make it?

Or was it just a random write up? Anyway, solid piece. Might wanna work on your structure a bit tho


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[Atone]

Yo I like your use of multies, always a plus....also, this sounds like it hits hard. Good shit there


Not sure if this is a verse, free-verse or what...How many bars did you intend to make it?

Or was it just a random write up? Anyway, solid piece. Might wanna work on your structure a bit tho


Hit me back up?
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=127043

At first i began writing a verse for a song called "I'm Crazy" which i was planning to go back to how i used to sound like eminem when i was younger, i had that whole shady style, but then i tried recording it and didn't like the way it sounded so i kept doing edits til i finally finished, and it turned into this, usually a 4 minute song takes me 20 minutes to record, but that night, this 1 minute freestyle took me a full hour to record and make sure it sounded right, i almost lost my voice