[Track 7 LP] Came to be.

[J.R.]

Feed within next 24 hours-




[Intro]
To all my friends..
I just wanna apologize...
I ain't been me..
That stops...NOW.


[Verse 1]
Call him Nutz, or BShady, Either way he Lost it all,
He was in a Rut or maybe, He chose to Drop and fall,
Either way, to his friends, he wasn't the Guy you knew,
At this point, It'd been simpler to just Die or lose,
Why I choose, To dismember my friends emotional health,
I can't really remember, I just know it hurts my own as well,
I'm alone in hell, If you heard it, his tone would tell,
That he's grown to fail, His souls been sold to shells,
I'm sorry for Using you, and I'm sorry for Abusing truths,
Its caused me to be Losing dudes, Some who Knew the proof,
and saved my ass, All I could do was crave to pass,
I was ,facing that, Facing facts, Chasing rap..
Think he's abrasive? Yeah,
I doubt the temptations lack,
Maybe he just impatient at,
Rising to the top, He's been waiting back,
Since 1998, Been trying to climb to the top spot,
And all he could wish for, was to drop the hot shot,
And to block the dicks coming up, He wanted to cock block,
Now look what he's become, He forgot his dream,
Forgot his homies, He's done, He's not who he seemed,
Not the guy that leaned, his neck to the side,
Just to help you in life, He'll never realize,
What he did was wrong, He'll just regret,
So he sings this song, Hoping to get death...


[Chorus]
And all my friends left me,
And all my friends gave up,
Won't be upset see,
Cause they're done holding B up,
And He's gonna drown,
Slowly and painfully,
The man you see,
is not who he came to be.

[Verse 2]
Now he's alone, coping via Painful regret,
Hoping to mask it, it left him Brainless instead,
Now He's just as Insane as a vet,
Who left the game without a Flame in his head!
To All my friends, I'm sorry about who I Came to be,
This is Where I end, Hopefully we'll Maybe see,
The day I change, The day I remember my name,
The day fame, Gets ahold of me adn catches ablaze..
Until then..The lights are out,
and hate? Just shining down,
It's thoughts I'm writing down,
I got to learn to bind my mouth,
Tie it down, learn when to speak,
Crying now, Burn them fools that you concevied...
Anyway...Later y'all.

[Mr.DGAF]

I like this, man. The rhyming and flow are both on point, but it's the emotion and concept that I liked most. My only complaint was the cock block line, which isn't even really that big of a deal. But yeah, this felt honest, and I liked that a lot. Mucho props man, it's hard to write an emotional piece and keep the rhymes solid, but you did a pretty good job of maintaing both rhymes and flow, while getting the point across.

Mind feeding mine whenever you get a chance? http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=127829

[JamaicanPattlez]

Very emotional, my dude. I liked the flow but the shorter bars I had trouble with. I have a feeling you probably wrote this and you were getting emotional yourself. Whatever the case, I really liked what you did.

Feedback when you can! viewtopic.php?f=24&t=127786

[Man1x]

The emotion was amazing B.... really nothing to say. Amazing.

[SG.]

Very emotional shit right there. Rap this to the Ricky beat and it's an awesome song.

Maybe you could put the verses in two 16-liners instead of a 25 and a 15.

Feed back? http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=127560

[J.R.]

The emotion was amazing B.... really nothing to say. Amazing.

Thanks.

At the rest, gonna feed you all today or tomorrow.

[Man1x]

No problem and I understand if your Through the Looking Glass verse takes a while, take all the time you need and if you need to drop it no biggie.

[J.R.]

No problem and I understand if your Through the Looking Glass verse takes a while, take all the time you need and if you need to drop it no biggie.

I was actually working on it.

[Man1x]

Alright, I'm just saying I understand if you need more time

[J.R.]

Alright, I'm just saying I understand if you need more time

[J.R.]

Alright, I'm just saying I understand if you need more time