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Mat Demaz- Without A Brain (Freestyle)

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Mat Demaz- Without A Brain (Freestyle)

Postby mdemaz » Oct 7th, '11, 17:46

Just a 16 I wrote today that I'll link with other premeditated shit I do live..
I finna put it in a song maybe or modify it.

I was born without a brain a microchip with 8 bones that dislocate
I'm wearing wack rappers like rubbers blocking all the piss yo' take
outta me it's really boring and dumb same old story then come
fuck a college lecture I'll make you sit through a web forum
fuck a car I'm running over fuckwits on foot
bitch step off before throw a sprint mobile at your moot
haters can hate me but I still get my bread and be fun
sticking my cock into your bitches cream bun
making you bleed then raping your knees
taking your keys slam on the brakes too late hit grey trees
I make fakes plead to not kill them with razors I take with me
baby let's get naked please do drugs and get baked on weed
I'm too nuts in the head to diss back pricks that can't rap
that just write shit and expect respect you dicks eat my ass
I'm murdering ghostwriters and I ain't even mad at them
we all know that no one wants to fuck with demaz phantom.

What ya'll think?
Should I use it or modify it?

(Also, what do you think of the piece in general : D)

LOF:
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Re: Mat Demaz- Without A Brain (Freestyle)

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 7th, '11, 18:41

I'd definitely say modify it. I can't really flow to that, I don't know how you did lol. It's nice though. :y: Return the favor? viewtopic.php?f=24&t=129972
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Re: Mat Demaz- Without A Brain (Freestyle)

Postby mdemaz » Oct 7th, '11, 18:57

JamaicanPattlez wrote:I'd definitely say modify it. I can't really flow to that, I don't know how you did lol. It's nice though. :y: Return the favor? viewtopic.php?f=24&t=129972

I think I made a few bars too short..But I got a habit of using a slow and rushed flow..
=\..I think I fed that.
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Re: Mat Demaz- Without A Brain (Freestyle)

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 7th, '11, 19:01

mdemaz wrote:
JamaicanPattlez wrote:I'd definitely say modify it. I can't really flow to that, I don't know how you did lol. It's nice though. :y: Return the favor? viewtopic.php?f=24&t=129972

I think I made a few bars too short..But I got a habit of using a slow and rushed flow..
=\..I think I fed that.


No worries, must be one of those "You gotta hear it" type of deal, and yeah, you replied. :y:
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