Outcast

[Words]

This kind of paints the whole picture of why WorDs exists. He's born out of this detest of the people that have bullied me growing up. He acts like a more confident voice to speak out against the shit that they've done. This is probably going to be one I end up recording, so there may be more added on when that happens (longer verses maybe a third verse) but only if I need it. If you think it needs to be longer, please let me know. Enjoy.
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Intro-
This song is dedicated to all those who have ever made me feel this way. Eat a dick- and FUCK YOU!


Verse 1-
Why am I that guy? That one odd man out
Who because of you, I always have doubt
about anything and everything, in my mind.
Why is it that, you never seem to return my kind?
When its time to be nice, there is no time,
It's the motto, the slogan that you live by
It makes me rip hair from head, and scream why
And I cannot fit in, no matter how hard I try.
Like fire, or parasite burning and eating inside
me everyday every night when I sleep
at lunch when I sit alone, just try'n to eat
Creeps in my mind, seeps through causes blind
Don't you know? Creating insanity is impolite?
Why can't you just read and believe my distress
realize all this anxiety and all the social unrest
Within me. All I ask is for you to be a cunt less.

Chorus-
I'm an outcast, it's what I'm meant to be
I'm an outcast, it's what you made me
I'm an outcast, it's what my title reads
x2
I'm an outcast, aren't you proud? Now lemme be. (only the second time)

Verse 2-
I tried to fit in with the rest of em, really I did.
It never worked, so I took my handed and folded it
Well shit now, how bout I leave doubt and go all in?
You're all a bunch of ass-backward plastic bastards
Get'n beat-up by this heat-up spastic half-nerd.
You deserve it too. For stew'n this evil brew
Leave me dude, cause you know it's the truth.
Finally it seems that Casey's been peeled.
WorDs from his shell, revealed to be real.
You did it, by all those times you ignored me
All those times you laughed and destroyed me
Well hell with that, now you go and goad me?
I could be anything, nobody should have told me.
Cause now I'll be a nightmare- no longer try and be a friend
Cold shoulder I won't care- if we ever meet or ever see again.
And I'll carry that shit with me, all the way through the end.

Chorus-
I'm an outcast, it's what I'm meant to be
I'm an outcast, it's what you made me
I'm an outcast, it's what my title reads
x2
I'm an outcast, aren't you proud? Now lemme be. (only the second time)


Outro-
Thank You.....

[Sam.]

I see the approach that you used for this is kinda personal, which you handled very well.Yes, I can that.This piece has Emotion filled everywhere, seeing the circumstances that you've dealt, this has come exceptionally well.The overall flow was good, lacked complexity butt fuck that, even without that this flowed nicely, the 2nd verse has the most amazing flow from the whole piece. Not only that the message that was in the 2nd verse was very charismatic. One thing that really stood out for me was the way the way you ended both the verses, dope way to do that.


Verse1

realize all this anxiety and all the social unrest
Within me. All I ask is for you to be a cunt less.

Verse 2

I could be anything, nobody should have told me.
Cause now I'll be a nightmare- no longer try and be a friend
Cold shoulder I won't care- if we ever meet or ever see again.
And I'll carry that shit with me, all the way through the end.

Amazing work mate.

I also liked the story telling aspect, that’s what I always do with my pieces too.

Keep slayin ‘em.

[Words]

Thanks for the feed Sam. I always take what you say into account and try to constantly improve that way. Nothing but respect here

[Sam.]

Thanks for the feed Sam. I always take what you say into account and try to constantly improve that way. Nothing but respect here

Props brah.

[autotooner]

Good shit man, it flowed very well. I really liked this part:

You're all a bunch of ass-backward plastic bastards
Get'n beat-up by this heat-up spastic half-nerd.

[Sam.]

^ Dude, you need to be more general in giving feed, this one line feeds is against the Rules of this Section.

[Spyder]

agree with Sam on gotta give more feed man, thats at least the second time ive seen you do this.
it can be considered spamming and doesnt count as a link of feed if you tried to use it as such

[autotooner]

okay, sorry guys, I will improve on that.