Self-depreciation

[JamaicanPattlez]

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I have a bigger ego than Kardashian's ass,
Everyone wants to fuck it, and that's sadly a fact,
I'm a broke kid who gets all his shit from Wal-Mart,
Even my own kicks were a gift from Hallmark!
I still wear glasses I got from Grade Seven,
I'm equal to a black kid who never played Lennon,
Never got bitches, but I have love handles,
I get a lot of disses, what else you gon' trample?
I got ample Snapple, man I've got an addiction,
Tie my ankles while I ramble and slap with conviction,
My idea of a date is KFC and sparking water,
See that's why all my mates may not seem so startlingy hotter,
I like chicks with big tits and their teeth like chicklets,
But I'm a big dick so this means I'm the shit on a clit rip,
And self-depreciation is what I do best,
I can tell the reaching patience's gotten high through death.

[Man1x]

"I'm here because I'm here...."

Haha but cool verse my bro but the topic is very over used, might want to branch out?

[JamaicanPattlez]

"I'm here because I'm here...."

Haha but cool verse my bro but the topic is very over used, might want to branch out?

I suppose... I just made this on the spot lol. Took like 15 to write it so yeeeeeeeah... haha. Thanks though!

[Man1x]

I really have no problem with the technicalities just the topic is over used, but I'll give you the fact that original topics are hard to come up with. Plus, Yela just took away more original concepts with his album making it harder to be original. Like that whole album I was thinking that I wish I came up with all that shit.

[JamaicanPattlez]

To be honest, I'd rather be real than anything... Yela's original because he's real. That's where it stems from lol. I get you though, no worries.

[JamaicanPattlez]

Thanks man! I love bashing myself ( ) in lyrics, I find it funny. That, and I like to diss myself on weaknesses before the other guy can. Hmmm.. maybe I should keep some of these in my arsenal...

[JamaicanPattlez]

Thanks man! I love bashing myself ( ) in lyrics, I find it funny. That, and I like to diss myself on weaknesses before the other guy can. Hmmm.. maybe I should keep some of these in my arsenal...

I do it all the time too haha

Cool. This verse's content reminds me of Throw It Up now that I think about it...

[JamaicanPattlez]

Haha. Patiently waiting. Currently writing a new piece, so look out for it!

[Sam.]

Fuuny ass shit, like the humor element of this.I assume that any Artist who makes fun of himself and is so open about it, makes a mark in everyone's eyes and improves as an Artist.That's exactly what you're trying to do and succeeded to an extent.Keep at it.Liked the piece, 6/10 worthy tbh.


Keep slayin 'em.

[JamaicanPattlez]

Fuuny ass shit, like the humor element of this.I assume that any Artist who makes fun of himself and is so open about it, makes a mark in everyone's eyes and improves as an Artist.That's exactly what you're trying to do and succeeded to an extent.Keep at it.Liked the piece, 6/10 worthy tbh.


Keep slayin 'em.

Thanks man! Greatly appreciated.

[Man1x]

Yea, Jp I wasn't saying this bad. It reminded me of throw it up too that's why I said what I said

[Sam.]

Yea, Jp I wasn't saying this bad. It reminded me of throw it up too that's why I said what I said

How about going for the feed that you promised?You have time to stay online, but...

[Man1x]

Yea, Jp I wasn't saying this bad. It reminded me of throw it up too that's why I said what I said

How about going for the feed that you promised?You have time to stay online, but...

I said by Sunday, and I'm in a car bumping radioactive traveling to Penssylvania. I'll feed by Sunday I said, I'm not reading all those bars on such a small screen

[JamaicanPattlez]

Yea, Jp I wasn't saying this bad. It reminded me of throw it up too that's why I said what I said

No worries. Though I guess that at least says something!

[autotooner]

I like it man, stuff like this, even if overused, is always an interesting topic to me. I can't wait to read more.