Pardon My French

[Eedee]

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Just a little something I wrote just now in between writing for my EP.

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Pardon my French, little lady, but scoot the fuck over,
I'm fizzing up in the studio like I shook the booth soda,
Stop flinchin' little bitch, I ain't gonna smack ya,
Pinchin' off the bleeding while you fuckin' run and jack the -
the sucker from the baby's mouth, I'm turnin' into a Shady now,
Better flow before I rock the colt, burnin' into a crazy - BLAOW!
Shit, that wasn't me officer, I wouldn't lie, I swear,
Rap doesn't see where I'm coming from, so how do I fare?
I don't fly coach, I fly ballboy and point guard,
I'll break your joints off, I boast enough to anoint ya,
the worst MC on the planet, my TV you can have it,
I'll be the first to breathe, the curse-ed me, it's Eedee bitch, so can it.

[Sam.]

Really impressive verse.

I liked the verse from the start till the very end. The Multis that I noticed were really deep and stood out as the strongest pillar of this verse along with the content. One thing about the content that I liked was the transition of thoughts, that was an excellent way of executing the whole thing.

The way the Rhymes were structured, the flow became smoother. I know that you're a Rapper and record stuff, so the way you placed your Rhymes may seem weird to some, but for me it was just fine.

I've no criticism's man, this was dope as fuck. Thanks for sharing.

Keep slayin 'em.

[Sam.]

4 in the same post?? It's a new "Guinness World Record".

[Eedee]

Shit guys, thanks haha

Didn't expect anyone to like it, to be honest. I'll keep writing more and putting 'em in here

Thanks!

[Sam.]

It wasn't that bad, don't underestimate yourself.