I've Still Got It

[SG.]

My mixtape's just been cock-blocked and thrown to the wall
I'll fix the scrape that I'm in, to show you drones that I ball
I ain't gonna king you, cuz you've got enimees yet
Let the multi-syllables drop, I've passed every test
This ain't my curtain call, so wipe the trims of my coat
I am quite certain y'all can't sight the end of my quote
Because my words echo onward, my speech has been foreign-heard
But you all hustling backward, feedback is what you don't deserve
Call me the eminematherstan, that shit's probably an anagram for Stan
What the fuck does it matter, man? I'm a vigilante with a Batarang in hand
Doesn't Em know that fossil fuel is about to evaporate
When I come out rapping, and your choice is flout or salivate
I came alone, and I've still been checked in reality
You wanna go and diss me? Then expect a fatality
I'll give you love and war, mashed together with glue
That's a paradox, oh yeah, that's like your lyrics too

LOF: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=134229&p=1813368#p1813368

[SG.]

Jeez, y'all are sleeping.

[Sam.]

Jeez, y'all are sleeping.

We have a sad section man, fuck this shit.Don't think I won't feed anyone that post's here(Except a forum noob).I'm not selfish and never think that I'm the almighty writer and I'm second to none. Irrespective of what you think of me, I'll still be feeding. That's just not me to feed those whom I like, I'm not partial.

Feedback:
I can see whom you're dissing, those were sublimel shot's but I got the hint though.Definitely a weak diss, you didn't go deep in dissing him, but I guess that's your choice. I would term this as a "Don't Give A Fuck" reply to him where you Rhymed the same thoughts(almost) that came to your mind when he made those points in his post. It's cool that you could think about that and write it down properly and in a systematic way. Technically this was good and you managed to put your thoughts across.By the way I was "eminematherstan", I changed my name to "MCSam" then "Sam.".

Keep slayin 'em.

[SG.]

I wasn't just dissing the one person though. There were subliminals fired at you and 4 others.

[J.R.]

Trims, Sam,

Tell us the others, or PM me, Muy intersante.

[Sam.]

May I ask you why?

[SG.]

Nah, it seemed like a good line. No offense intended.

[Mr.DGAF]

I found this piece to be kind of ehh. I don't know why, because technically this is nice. I just didn't really find anything that sticks out, you know? There was one line I thought was quite clever though,:

Doesn't Em know that fossil fuel is about to evaporate
When I come out rapping, and your choice is flout or salivate

That's what I'm talking about man. I know you can put some crazy wit into it, I'm just waiting to see it executed perfectly. You're definitely progressing too, so it's only a matter of time honestly.

[Sam.]

Nah bra, it's f9.
You did it for the sake of rhyme and to fill in the verse? Okay then cool.

[JamaicanPattlez]

Interesting verse. You certainly haven't lost it. Stop doubting yourself! Anyway, nukes dropped, dooks laid and a shit storm's a-brewin'. Nice job!

[Blu]

Trims, Sam,

Tell us the others, or PM me, Muy intersante.

Enimee, too.

I LOVED that Trimms line.. beautiful.

Good shit brah , I can't find the Sam diss though..

[SG.]

9 lines down.

[SG.]

You got the fifth one wrong.

[SG.]

Nope.

And I suddenly remember there's actually seven.

[Trimss]

Trims, Sam,

Tell us the others, or PM me, Muy intersante.

Enimee, too.

I LOVED that Trimms line.. beautiful.

Good shit brah , I can't find the Sam diss though..

Damn guys, really?

*name* I love you for typing my name without any mistake every time you mention me, really.