Seize The Moment

[Wreck]

Link of Feed: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=134445&p=1814884#p1814884

Honestly, I think this is probably my favorite piece I've posted on here in this section. Comments/feed is greatly appreciated.



Cowards cower down, preparing to knock down towers
this is sound's power, to let music drown out our pain like showers
Sunny days were made to bounce back from the rain & the thunder
pain & discomfort, so take it as a gain, don't play the games, be the hunter
instead of the hunted, the wanted criminals, felons, just be a passionate man
Got Jersey in me, more then your average fan, trying to make money & put cabbage in hands
Life is having a dance, so live for it, don't wait for nothing to come to you
Do everything you wanted to, when you were little, but were too young to do
Smoke a blunt or two, time to ease the pain, fuck people that say "he's insane!"
Jesus mane, I'm chilling in the freezing rain, trying to be the same
as you, not trying to stick out like a sore thumb, or red stripes on a white hoody
Take compliments when someone gives em out, like "You're doing nice, rookie"
I'm trying to take nothing for granted, take my flowers like nothing was planted
I'm struggling for standards, cause everyone around me wants me to be candid
I can't sit, everywhere I look it's the media, sex cells/sells, & some pamphlets
I'm done handling, my business in the public, I try to sing for the moment like Hanson
And be as private as can be, it's funny how at times my mind is so empty, I'm riding at 10 speed
Keep quiet, people strive on the frenzy, & frantic, even my pen can't stand it, let's see
Let's try to focus, now what the fuck is my mind smoking, I try to stay in line but I'm hopeless
Hoping for more luck so I can seize the chances, grind, & put behind what's broken

[Ka0t1c]

it was decent man keep spitting

Sunny days were made to bounce back from the rain & the thunder
pain & discomfort, so take it as a gain, don't play the games, be the hunter

i like that part the best

[JamaicanPattlez]

This is pretty awesome man. Not a fan of long bars, but nice nonetheless haha. Keep it up!

[Mr.DGAF]

The long lines would typically make it harder to flow to, but if you've got a ton of multies, it's okay. And trust me dude, you definitely have that. I feel like the pacing of the multies was a lot better in this piece than in the last one I fed. There were some quite impressive lines, I like that you started off quick with an inverse. Those are definitely the hardest rhymes to nail, but I liked what you did with it right off the bat. The multies were solid of course, like I said earlier. The flow didn't suffer from the longer lines, and the content was nice bruh. I'm digging it mane.

If you get the time, could you feed something for a brutha? http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=133945

[Wreck]

The long lines would typically make it harder to flow to, but if you've got a ton of multies, it's okay. And trust me dude, you definitely have that. I feel like the pacing of the multies was a lot better in this piece than in the last one I fed. There were some quite impressive lines, I like that you started off quick with an inverse. Those are definitely the hardest rhymes to nail, but I liked what you did with it right off the bat. The multies were solid of course, like I said earlier. The flow didn't suffer from the longer lines, and the content was nice bruh. I'm digging it mane.

If you get the time, could you feed something for a brutha? http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=133945

Thanks for the feed man. And yeah, I wrote this to a beat, and it flowed fine, so it all depends, I agree. And definitely man, I will.

This is pretty awesome man. Not a fan of long bars, but nice nonetheless haha. Keep it up!

Thanks bro, appreciate it.

it was decent man keep spitting

Sunny days were made to bounce back from the rain & the thunder
pain & discomfort, so take it as a gain, don't play the games, be the hunter

i like that part the best

Thank You. Honestly, I tried to write this from the heart, so some lines are long, but fit the flow I was using. I'm gonna use this for a song, produced by VTZ. I just tried to incorporate some real life situations into it, like depression (not to give up in life), bad days, and so on.

[Sam.]

This was a monster of a verse man, all the way. The creativity that you put up in this is really applause worthy. There was a consistency in the concept and was equal throughout the verse. The same thing can be said about the Multis, good way of using them. In matters of Multis, you're just like Geno. Both of you do it with utmost ease. I knew about your ability to use Multis way before I read any of Geno's work so I know. Keep that shit going man.Word. The flow is sick and if you ask me in order to enjoy the flow I imagined a beat with a drum pattern and it flowed well with that, so props on that count too.

Keep slayin 'em ~ Eminem.

[Wreck]

This was a monster of a verse man, all the way. The creativity that you put up in this is really applause worthy. There was a consistency in the concept and was equal throughout the verse. The same thing can be said about the Multis, good way of using them. In matters of Multis, you're just like Geno. Both of you do it with utmost ease. I knew about your ability to use Multis way before I read any of Geno's work so I know. Keep that shit going man.Word. The flow is sick and if you ask me in order to enjoy the flow I imagined a beat with a drum pattern and it flowed well with that, so props on that count too.

Keep slayin 'em ~ Eminem.

Thanks bro for the compliments, & feed here- totally appreciate it. And that was what I was going for, I'm glad somebody got that I was trying to have that deep concept, with the multis mixed in on top of the concept.

Maybe I'll put this to a beat after all.

[Sam.]

Could you hit my piece with Spyder?

[Wreck]

Could you hit my piece with Spyder?

Yeah definitely. Hmu if you wanna collab too, I'd be down with that shit, I like your style.

[Sam.]

Could you hit my piece with Spyder?

Yeah definitely. Hmu if you wanna collab too, I'd be down with that shit, I like your style.

I like the offer but I've quit writing.

[Wreck]

Could you hit my piece with Spyder?

Yeah definitely. Hmu if you wanna collab too, I'd be down with that shit, I like your style.

I like the offer but I've quit writing.

Damn, why? Just curious.

[Wreck]

Sam could you feed my newest piece Retarded Shit? Thanks bro.

[Sam.]

I was fed up of the way the Verses get late feed, that's why I quit. I'll feed that track in awhile, Homie.