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Do You Do Drugs?

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CrAzY Freestyle (WARNING: I'm a weird peron so its weird!!!)

Postby Virginia_Slim_50021 » May 23rd, '06, 23:19

Got cought smokin bud, and my mom grounded me

Not for the fact I was smokin, but for stealin her weed

Ran away from home, came back three weeks later.

Tryin to act nice, and hide the fact that I hate her

Knocked at the door for like a hour and a half

But then my fuckin parents called the cops on my ass

Ran away from the pigs and sat down on a bench

saw a kid eating a hot dog, and mugged him wit a wrench

About three in the morning i couldn't sleep no more

Was hungery as fuck, so i robbed a convienient store

Broke into someones basement and fell asleep on the couch

Awoke an hour later with duck tape over my mouth

I was tied to a chair, and my head was throbbin

Tried to yell for help, I needed Batman And Robbin

But at that same time someone walked through the door

Wit a mask over their face, I saw blood on the floor

I got real scared and started to bug the fuck out

They walked over to me and removed the tape from my mouth

They removed the mask from their and I saw who it was

I looked up at her face, and I saw it was my cuz

She said "You Snitched, and I'm about to teach you a lesson"

Thats when she reched in her pocket, and pulled out a smith and wesson

I screamed real loud and then i closed my eyes

When I opened 'em again I saw a big suprise

Everything was gone and there was just white walls all around me

And then a whole bunch a bugs started to surround me

I was just seein shit, there weren't any bugz

And Kids, thats why you should not do drugs!!



JUST KIDDING DO ALL DA DRUGS YA WANT!!!

FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Postby Inzanity » May 23rd, '06, 23:23

LMFAO :laughing: I don't do drugs but that was funny
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Postby Virginia_Slim_50021 » May 23rd, '06, 23:25

tHank YoU!
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Postby Nick419 » May 24th, '06, 00:04

lol they should teach this shit in school! :laughing: that was tight man it sounded like some old school slim shady shit from like 99
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Postby Virginia_Slim_50021 » May 24th, '06, 00:17

thanax. they should teach that in school!!!! yea!! i know what ima be when i grow up now!! a motha fuckin elementary school teacher!! teach 'em the proper way of doin all that shit!! :smoking:
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Postby Infliction » May 24th, '06, 07:38

nice sounded like slim shady shit right there.
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Postby walend » May 24th, '06, 16:49

good one, keep it up
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Postby Deadishot » May 24th, '06, 18:59

haha taht was nice
keep it up :thumbsup:
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Postby kait » May 25th, '06, 01:13

Really simple, but you've got a Slim Shady/Brain Damage thing going on there. Pretty good man!
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Postby Virginia_Slim_50021 » May 25th, '06, 02:01

Thanxxx for da comments
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Postby Vejjie » Jun 15th, '06, 19:57

That's realy dope. Well done!!!!
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Postby SNaKe » Jun 15th, '06, 20:00

great man keep up the good work...... :8)
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Postby katastrophe » Jun 16th, '06, 20:46

eminemfan419 wrote:lol they should teach this shit in school! :laughing: that was tight man it sounded like some old school slim shady shit from like 99


it did sound like slim shady shit...good job
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jun 26th, '06, 00:56

dam that was good lol nicwe work :worship:
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