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Postby 4D » Jun 3rd, '06, 13:15

FAme can bring a genius of the game shame,
Look at Jacko, Mariah and i think of Shady`s name,
Signs are starting to show, that he`s losin the plot,
Released Encore, And for him, he produced a flop,
He set the standards sky high, could only drop after that,
In recent interviews he`s been crazy, or is he actin wack,
Is it a grand scheme, to over expose the freakish shit
So he can end that, and get back to writing genius shit!!

Next Topic : hospitals

EDit ; Sorry Aspirine, didn`t see your post, was to G Killas "Fame" Topic. :D
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Postby AspirinE » Jun 3rd, '06, 13:21

g_killa wrote:i creap dark nights ripping spinal coloms outta bodys
the cold blooded frights as there stabbed with there own shotty
collecting debts with no respect a preditor who disemboles his victim
snatch the necklace and rape the carcus im invisble to hitmen
got the area on lockdown no gets out alive, or hides
violent tecneics so profound with black and deckers that go through the eyes
the parents cry, its frightening to watch there kid hanging freom a street light
like suicide a move they die so when the f.d try to save then i sniper ..goodnight

next topic: fame


Fuck yeah, my name gone be in books, my words for quoting/
new year to start, new aim for faim, ... the moment's golden/
And i dont need no name built from lies promoting/
mic-holding controlling the flow, lyrics geniusly spilling/
I earn more props with each word, while the vynil spinning/
no stops, a road to the top long so i take short-cuts/
if God aint gone be able to help me, then ima evolve plots/


new topic: crime
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Postby AspirinE » Jun 3rd, '06, 13:22

fuck, sorry guys, i was trying to be a smart ass and tried to correct my mistake :unsure:
thought id fill the topic gkilla posted bout while no one was posting, frodie apeared outa no were :tounge2:


i wont spit till this is solved lol (i was a little bored just now)
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Postby 4D » Jun 3rd, '06, 13:39

(Don`t apologise, i`m gonna do one on Hospitals and CRime, that should solve it!) :p

I ran in the side entrance, got to get a fix
Lookin for drugs, hospitals got all the hits,
Sneakin through the hall, keepin a low pro,
I found the room, adrenaline pumpin like a yoyo,
Hey, let me go Ho, Nosey ass nurse came in,
Knocked her out and her ass got a rape..in
And i got aids, what she doesn`t know doesn`t hurt her,
Nah, but, i gotta go now, not gettin busted for her!

Topic : Vietnam
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Postby AspirinE » Jun 3rd, '06, 13:51

FORDIE wrote:(Don`t apologise, i`m gonna do one on Hospitals and CRime, that should solve it!) :p

I ran in the side entrance, got to get a fix
Lookin for drugs, hospitals got all the hits,
Sneakin through the hall, keepin a low pro,
I found the room, adrenaline pumpin like a yoyo,
Hey, let me go Ho, Nosey ass nurse came in,
Knocked her out and her ass got a rape..in
And i got aids, what she doesn`t know doesn`t hurt her,
Nah, but, i gotta go now, not gettin busted for her!

Topic : Vietnam



A couwrdly war is thought with napalm bombs dropped on children/
Now as we saw, that there was more harm, and people fearing/
Faggot soldiers that fought for others death, deserve no pitty/
let them maggots rot in hell, by god punished severely/

...


Next topic: retaliation.
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Postby 4D » Jun 3rd, '06, 14:12

(it was the politics that were gay, the soldiers followed orders)


Don`t fuck with me and I won`t retaliate
If i get vengeful with a pencil its a sadly fate,
You`re destined for doom and i`ll stencil the gloom
Before you instigate, invision mate the stench of the tomb,
The tension in rooms, when i come in, is like the sky`s fallin,
I don`t even have to fight, when i write my rhyme`s brawlin
So don`t start trouble, cos i`ll double the rumble when I react,
Stay safe in haven, there`ll never be a day when i`ll be wack!

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Postby AspirinE » Jun 3rd, '06, 14:40

FORDIE wrote:(it was the politics that were gay, the soldiers followed orders)


Don`t fuck with me and I won`t retaliate
If i get vengeful with a pencil its a sadly fate,
You`re destined for doom and i`ll stencil the gloom
Before you instigate, invision mate the stench of the tomb,
The tension in rooms, when i come in, is like the sky`s fallin,
I don`t even have to fight, when i write my rhyme`s brawlin
So don`t start trouble, cos i`ll double the rumble when I react,
Stay safe in haven, there`ll never be a day when i`ll be wack!

Next topic : Blood



sorry i didnt rhyme in this post, but i made it clear that anyone who fought for others death. Just coz a soldier fights for crime (wich we call war) doesnt mean they should get respect for invading countries, raping women and burning people with naplm. I didnt mean it in the harshest way i said i ment in a way to offend those that go along with war crimes and those who killed without reason.
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Postby 4D » Jun 3rd, '06, 14:51

AspirinE wrote:sorry i didnt rhyme in this post, but i made it clear that anyone who fought for others death. Just coz a soldier fights for crime (wich we call war) doesnt mean they should get respect for invading countries, raping women and burning people with naplm. I didnt mean it in the harshest way i said i ment in a way to offend those that go along with war crimes and those who killed without reason.


(There`s gonna be some rhymes that were gonna want to discuss, and this one could go on a while, just spit a 4 line rhyme with "blood" in it and leave a topic, cos now i`ve nothing to rhyme about either and shit could get drag out a few pages)

Edit your post with a rhyme, and i`ll do the same here man! :D
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Postby yoshi » Jun 4th, '06, 21:05

Dudek was cool
but Boruc is a fool
Germany gonna beat us, same goes to Ecuador
and Costarica, cause our tactic is poor
Poland surely gonna fail
Cuz when it comes to football we're gay


it ain't good, but describes our team perfectly :8)


next topic: um.. whatever.. let's say poverty.. or you can just go for World Cup if you want lol :D
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Postby 4D » Jun 5th, '06, 14:24

I hate bono, he acts the honesty, with his concern for poverty
It`s hypocrisy, how much does it cost for him to live in democracy,
He`s a capatalist, and i`d rattle his lips with a bat if I ever meet him
I`m Irish and never liked his music, i`d prefer kick his teeth in!!

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Postby AspirinE » Jul 30th, '06, 17:44

FORDIE wrote:I hate bono, he acts the honesty, with his concern for poverty
It`s hypocrisy, how much does it cost for him to live in democracy,
He`s a capatalist, and i`d rattle his lips with a bat if I ever meet him
I`m Irish and never liked his music, i`d prefer kick his teeth in!!

Next topic : What`s funny?



You know whats funny? I two got bodies... in my basement/
my .. haands is bloddy, so u ..better face-it hunny/
u aint got no place to run at! :[ chase-ya-the gate way.. hurry!/
But i aint gone race ya, i gotta shotty, that shatter ur body/
or ill Batter-u-bluntly back of ur scull like a canibal-hungry/
then u lie-among-the other victims in-piles-rotting
disapear, Case closed, files forgotten/


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Postby MuNxMuN » Aug 4th, '06, 10:55

Sarah wrote:

Idk how many lines it had to be
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*reads thread title*
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Postby rhiannon » Aug 4th, '06, 10:56

eatin crumpets everyday,
i want crumpets get outta my way,
best wit butter, an not in the gutter,
hot an tasty,kind on ur waisty,
crumpets rule,
not bread u fool,
crumpets with the holes,
an not holes for moles,
lmao this rhyme is fuked,
theres no crumpet iv ever chucked,
coz i love them all,
if u eatin them giv me an call,
an we can havva picnic,
seriously i need 2 quit it,
I LIKE SLIMMY
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Aug 4th, '06, 10:57

:fuming: whats the nex topic :angry:
Its legendary status sittin behind this computer wiigga
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Postby rhiannon » Aug 4th, '06, 11:00

...umm sex lamo
I LIKE SLIMMY
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