Open the Casket ft. RainMan (Track 9)

[Mr.DGAF]

Track from my Epish thing, featuring RainMan on this one. Used the hook from the original beat, which is 'Go To Sleep', by Em. Enjoy.

Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cClJpybkLv0
Mr. DGAF Feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=143688
RainMan Feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=143758

[Verse 1 Mr. DGAF]
I said it once before I'm not an average being, I'm a savage demon
With a plan unleashing massive packs of bastard heathens
To attack your people, then come back and greet them with the wrath of evil
While you nap and dream of havok reaked upon your ass, you're seething
So you get all mad, you're screaming, not even a gat could beat me
So don't bother packing heaters, trust me dawg you can't defeat me
Cut the crap, we get the fact you act obscenely, but I rap this nasty track so bad you'll fiend it
Like the nipple that you weened from, I could crack your back and leave ya
Laying on your chest and bleeding, backwards on the cement, you ain't playing with the best
Like a maniac depressed, I get crazy and upset and then I'm bathing in your flesh,
I will slay you if you rest, maybe then you will regret ever making me get stressed
I'm not saying this to jest, what I say is what I mean, I'm not straying from the streets
Where you claim to be the king, well come on and see me G, I'll convert you to a Queen
You aren't worthy of this seat, you're just worthless, I'm a beast
You got nervous when you heard of all the murder that I bring
I could serve up your whole team, leave you curled up while you scream
Fuck the words you hurl at me, I get arrogant, an errant fool
So step to me and it's apparent I'm the dude who's careless and I wear it too
So make a move, I dare you to, unless you're just too scared to move
Fuck it then, I'll cary you to your gravesite and bury you, and leave you there without a tomb

[Hook Eminem]

[Verse 2 RainMan]
Quit tryna calm me down, there's no use
I already told you fuckers once that I got a short fuse
All it takes is a punk to push the wrong buttons
To start somethin', and there it is my mind is off runnin'
And by then there ain't no way that I can stop it, wait
Heart pumpin' at a constant rate, the very second that I spot some hate
In a dude's eyes, all it takes is a few tries
And his face'll feel the full force of my shoe size
12's give him a damn beatin', stampedin' his dome
Till his fuckin' jaw breaks, mouth bleed and it foams
Flatten him out in the very same streets that he roams
Get my point across without even squeezin' the chrome,
Whole crew, tusslin', scufflin', holdin' me back
No clue, why that's the nature in which I'm known to react
But I bring it to anyone who tryna scrap
A right, a jab, and he'd be lucky to leave the scene with his spine intact!

[Hook Eminem]

[RainMan44]

Mr.DGAF, you went OFF on this shit.


Cats is sleepin'

[Mr.DGAF]

Haha thanks guys, I thought we both came pretty hard. People be sleepin'.

[Mr.DGAF]

DGAF took it lyrically for sure, but it's a collab, not a competition. You were both pretty good and stuck to the theme / concept well. I thought Rain's flow was off slightly at the beginning but it definitely picked up was very smooth through 3/4 of it. I really liked that "Bleed and it foams" rhyme scheme. Descriptive enough to give me images in my head. I love it.

Overall a good collab. I'm not a fan of using Em beats (I always imitate his flow and can't get out of it), but that was your choice, and it is a dope beat so I'm not complaining.

DGAF - sidenote, I viewed your verse as a mix of Em's Go To Sleep verse (with the anger and passion) mixed with Tech N9ne rhyming haha. Crazy combination.

Haha thanks for the feed homie. And yeah, I tried to just rhyme my ass off on this one. And as always, Rainman came with a great verse.

[CrashBand]

Nice drop guys

Mr. DGAF - Great rhyming throughout.
I found there was a really smooth transition between the chains of multies
like "maniac depressed/saying it in jest" rhyme scheme moving into "straying from the streets/claim to be the king" and then "vert you to a Queen/worthy of this seat/worthless, I'm a beast". It was all really smooth.

You got nervous when you heard of all the murder that I bring
I could serve up your whole team, leave you curled up while you scream
Fuck the words you hurl at me,

Great internals man, especially that first line!.

Rainman -Quite simplistic rhyming in those fisrt four bars.
...Use/...fuse
...button/...somethin'/...runnin

and then as the verse draws out your rhyming rapidly picks up. Personally I would like to see good multies consistently throughout the whole verse.

I thought it finshed well and liked "be lucky to leave the scene with his spine intact!" to end with

[RainMan44]

thanks for the feed man, appreciate that

Just to add, the first four bars these were the rhymes I was aiming for
no use/ short fuse
wrong buttons/ start somethin'/ off runnin'

[CrashBand]

thanks for the feed man, appreciate that

Just to add, the first four bars these were the rhymes I was aiming for
no use/ short fuse
wrong buttons/ start somethin'/ off runnin'

lol

well point still stands about the rhyming greatly improving as the song went on

[Ka0t1c]

great verses, i especially like how lyrical MR. DGAF was, very great to read, i haven't heard u rap it yet tho

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Dope as hell. Mr. DGAF, I wish i could rap like you lol

[Mr.DGAF]

Thanks for the feed guys, glad you enjoyed it. If you got any tracks needing feed, hit me up, I'll feed 'em.

@K, I need to get a mic man. I never really had an intention to ever record my shit, but I think it'd be cool now to at least try.

[CrashBand]

^yeah wouldn't mind, if you could
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