An Underdog Story

[Spyder]

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Fuckin talkin big to me, I’m a known vet
I think listenin to his own shit made A-tone Deaf.
fuck your attitude, lets take it to a battle dude
goin against me... shit now I actually feel bad for you.
whole site laugh at you, get it down to votes
now watch me 'Rap Divine'... around your throat! (wrap da vine)
you got your Sights set on the step I’m on
sept with that TLC vision boy, that Left Eye gone!
tlc, Total Loss of Cornea quick call the coroner
chase you to the seventh Circle of hell and still Corner ya.
verses shit, whack lyrics and flows bitten
and im bettin even your suicide note'll be ghost written
yeah its harsh but gotta admit you know its right
you Gary Busey bro, cant help but Over-Bite!
you damn fool I’ll damage ya and your fam too
but I can never be bodied like Grants tomb.
Rap to comedy, well made me laugh… only you
Now watch me drop that shit to murder Tony Hughes.
You cravin your name in fame, who you want attention from?
You’ll forever Score None, how you getting Endless Love!
I laugh at your rhymes, are those actual tries
Bitch slap this kids ass so Jekil can Hide. (lol)
Don’t release your best shit… it sure shows it
Look at his fuckin face, thinkin dude got the Burn Notice!!

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Damn I feel sorry for who this is about lol. Your definitely in my top fav rappers on TRShady, do you record??

Loved this piece, your word play is always killer and it seems like you flowed really good with this. Kind of sounds like a battle rap to me. Nice Going

[CrashBand]

Fuck this was good man. Great fuckin punhes.

"verses shit, whack lyrics and flows bitten
and im bettin even your suicide note'll be ghost written" -prob my favourite

"I think listenin to his own shit made A-tone Deaf."

"now watch me 'Rap Divine'... around your throat!"

One of the better writers on here. Would you mind giving me some feed? could use some tips from a good writer

[Spyder]

thanks guys. yeah Crash ill feed some stuff man

and @Shady, yeah i record, im not that great audio-wise but Ax is helpin me
and i believe im alot better than my last track so steppin in the right direction.

thanks for checkin bros. also vote for the the CW/RB awards at the top of each board

[_Steven_]

Damn spyder! loved the punches in there! flow was on point, great piece!

Rap to comedy, well made me laugh… only you

haha i enjoyed that!

[Ka0t1c]

cool funny, good drop

[Mr.DGAF]

Solid shit as always, the ghostwritten suicide note was pretty fucking bombastic.

[Atone]

Hey look, somebody dissing me? nahhhhh

thank you

you have once again showed that i can inspire people, you took time out of your life to even write something for me

how cute, i'll try to keep you in mind when i'm writing my thank you's for my next album bro

keep doin your thing, don't write to much tho, writers block can really be a bitch homie

much love, peace dawggie

[Spyder]

look its the talking dead lol

dont get writers block, and i wrote this in my sleep homes.

good lookin... no pun on the eye thing... well maybe

[Man1x]

Solid shit as always, the ghostwritten suicide note was pretty fucking bombastic.

That got me going "OHHHHHH SHIT"

[Spyder]

haha thanks man

[Atone]

look its the talking dead lol

dont get writers block, and i wrote this in my sleep homes.

good lookin... no pun on the eye thing... well maybe

Problem with your eye joke is....

you havn't said anything i havn't heard yet, i went thru 4 years of high school of ppl sayin the same
old bullshit day after day, year after year, hell, some teachers even threw in a few shots.

[BigBoss]

Whats wrong with his eye?

[Atone]

Whats wrong with his eye?

i got a lazy eye, i'm half blind

[BigBoss]

Whats wrong with his eye?

i got a lazy eye, i'm half blind