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Atone The Underdog - Bring The Pain (With a Spyder Diss)

Postby Atone » Apr 1st, '12, 21:07

there's only a small percentage of this that is a diss to Spyder,

(Verse)
It's time that i come in and bomb this shit
on the tip, y'all say i'm cocky nah thats just confidence
i believe i can fly, stay high, touch the sky
rise above it all and I WILL NOT DIE
you can try, can't kill me tho, i'm way to strong
i will not fall, just stand tall and just hold on
i got a gift to curse ya, burst on the scene
motivate you to spit a verse to, i inspire dreams
I lay down the flow and hit ya with the hard shit
i'm on that illmatic rap, you just a bring all the boys to the yard bitch
dummy emcee's aint even on my radar, won't even pull that card kids
Wanna Be's talkin trash but i just ignore em
diss me i laugh but half of em are borin
read there little written and i start snorin
now back to my zone, where i stay with it
spray wicked rhymes, leave y'all amazed with it
i grew up a 90's kid jammin to Run D and Wu Tang
The God Allah, Busta, Nas, Jay and Cool James
so when i spit the listeners like OOOH DANG
this kid can bang, i just keep doin my thing
killa bee on the mic, spit shit to sting ya brain
a man with a method here to bring the pain

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Re: Atone The Underdog - Bring The Pain (With a Spyder Diss)

Postby Man1x » Apr 1st, '12, 21:39

I couldn't find the diss and why would you anyway?
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Bring The Pain (With a Spyder Diss)

Postby Atone » Apr 1st, '12, 21:44

Man1x wrote:I couldn't find the diss and why would you anyway?


"i'm on that illmatic rap, you just a bring all the boys to the yard bitch
dummy emcee's aint even on my radar, won't even pull that card kids
Wanna Be's talkin trash but i just ignore em
diss me i laugh but half of em are borin
read there little written and i start snorin"

and i dissed him cuz he went at me with a random ass diss
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Bring The Pain (With a Spyder Diss)

Postby Blu » Apr 1st, '12, 21:55

Rewrite the "diss" to make it more literal so Spyder can end your rapping "career" before it even started.
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Bring The Pain (With a Spyder Diss)

Postby Man1x » Apr 1st, '12, 23:10

Atone The Underdog wrote:
Man1x wrote:I couldn't find the diss and why would you anyway?


"i'm on that illmatic rap, you just a bring all the boys to the yard bitch
dummy emcee's aint even on my radar, won't even pull that card kids
Wanna Be's talkin trash but i just ignore em
diss me i laugh but half of em are borin
read there little written and i start snorin"

and i dissed him cuz he went at me with a random ass diss


I can't even link that to him.
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Bring The Pain (With a Spyder Diss)

Postby mdemaz » Apr 2nd, '12, 05:00

Lol, why are you randomly going at people?
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Bring The Pain (With a Spyder Diss)

Postby BigBoss » Apr 2nd, '12, 05:44

dude...spyder would fuck your shit up.
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Bring The Pain (With a Spyder Diss)

Postby BigBoss » Apr 2nd, '12, 05:45

I wanna see more of Yah Hah's stuff man :(
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Bring The Pain (With a Spyder Diss)

Postby Spyder » Apr 2nd, '12, 18:44

Yah was supposed to be back but... then he went again ahhah

and cmon is that even at me??
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Bring The Pain (With a Spyder Diss)

Postby Atone » Apr 2nd, '12, 22:46

Spyder wrote:Yah was supposed to be back but... then he went again ahhah

and cmon is that even at me??


Your not worth a full on diss, so i just threw small shots, i barly even felt like writing anything yesterday due to the death of somebody i was very close to, but felt like your diss needed some type of response,

with that said, i kept my head on straight and didn't totally go into bi-polar mode like i usually do in moments like this, which means i'm definitly overcoming that Bi-polar shit/depression.

Anyways, your diss to me was out of nowhere, it made me laugh but i don't understand why you felt the need to go at me, but it's whatever, keep doin your thing, just don't waste your time with bars at me and focus on making real shit.

what i'm tryin to say is instead of lame forum beef bullshit, focus on writin shit about your own life, you don't know me personaly, so why go at me?
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Bring The Pain (With a Spyder Diss)

Postby Blu » Apr 2nd, '12, 23:46

And Atone takes a L...
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Bring The Pain (With a Spyder Diss)

Postby Atone » Apr 3rd, '12, 03:57

Blu wrote:And Atone takes a L...


On a internet forum...oh no what will i do now?
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Bring The Pain (With a Spyder Diss)

Postby CrashBand » Apr 3rd, '12, 07:44

Geno wrote:
Atone The Underdog wrote:
Blu wrote:And Atone takes a L...


On a internet forum...oh no what will i do now?

Go record another off beat piece, of course!


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I'm not tryin to be rude, but I sincerely wanna fuck the taste out of your mouth
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Bring The Pain (With a Spyder Diss)

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Apr 4th, '12, 19:46

Geno wrote:
Atone The Underdog wrote:
Blu wrote:And Atone takes a L...


On a internet forum...oh no what will i do now?

Go record another off beat piece, of course!


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Re: Atone The Underdog - Bring The Pain (With a Spyder Diss)

Postby Mahmoud48 » Apr 4th, '12, 20:09

i still want my collab i didnt pay u $150 for nothing!
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