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Incy wincy Spyder diss!

Postby _Steven_ » Apr 2nd, '12, 20:36

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It's hilarious, the lies? man he told a bunch
He has eight arms and he still couldn't throw a punch
You feed off the weed, so your soul's in a ditch
cause Even Spiderman himself is controlled by that bitch (Mary Jane)
You cocky personality has got me to test
tell me why so arrogant since Anonymous left?
I don't even understand all the letters you spew
cause even silence itself sounds better than you
Your audio is atrocious, you spit like a hick
but the words I spit are twisted like a liquorice stick
So you better shut your fuckin mouth, for' I bring you to death
You're a Spyder, but you STILL aint the king of the web

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Re: Incy wincy Spyder diss!

Postby Strictt Ame » Apr 3rd, '12, 00:06

Decent, couple of humorous lines, couple played ones..but overall it was ok, seemed more as a instigation than a diss to me, but I prefer punches and disses to topicals so props for that
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Re: Incy wincy Spyder diss!

Postby Man1x » Apr 3rd, '12, 00:18

You're a Spyder, but you STILL aint the king of the web

Amazing line, damn
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Re: Incy wincy Spyder diss!

Postby Spyder » Apr 3rd, '12, 03:31

seen the web line like 5425 times

but u praise my diss to atone then diss me...
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Re: Incy wincy Spyder diss!

Postby _Steven_ » Apr 3rd, '12, 09:58

To be fair, I was just bored and this section needs livening up lol, no bad blood, I didn't go for any personals, I'm not usually a battle writer haha. Although no doubt you will respond, which I look forward too, it's all fun brotha!
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Re: Incy wincy Spyder diss!

Postby Spyder » Apr 3rd, '12, 22:31

word man i feel ya
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