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Where Are They Now

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Where Are They Now

Postby Atone » Apr 10th, '12, 20:09

(Chorus)
They used to tell the same old story
always trying to take away the glory
tellin me i'm just gonna fall down
but i stood up, now they nowhere to be found
just a whisper in the wind as i take a look around
and i ask myself, where are they now?

(Verse)
Remember back in school? back in the hall ways
in the class room, i was bein me all day
you was makin fun of my every move
my eye, my teeth, my clothes and my shoe's
my house, my block, my life sayin i would always lose
never gonna make it in rap, i'll just ammount to nothin
but i overcame depression and negativity now that's gotta count for somethin
i remember Mr. Johnson talkin down to me in the class
and all the students think i might just snap and beat his ass
but nah, i just ignored it, let them words pass
Bully's can't win if you don't let em in your head
man if i did a whole lot of people would be dead
write a song, save a life, be happy that i'm on this mic
instead of on the news ten o-clock at night
for shootin bullet's out a revolver
99 problems but killin a bitch aint gonna solve em
i just gotta find an outlet, somethin i can be free
so let me put this pen to work and just be me

(Chorus)

(Verse)
Walkin around lake view, wishin i could break thru
thinkin "tony why is it so many people gotta hate you"
the answer is envy, they wishin they could be who i am,
wishin they had my skill, but i wish they could understand
in a way they made me, cuz their words gave me motivation
to turn it against them and prove i have dedication
Remember when they used to ask me who i'm lookin at?
i wonder if they really thought i'd be shook by that
does it make you feel better to laugh at somethin i can't help?
i got a fucked up eye but you addicted to drugs, that's killin yourself
even i can see that, half blind but your half stupid and ruinin your health
in the end i'm winnin, you lose cuz you spendin all your money on pills
so look in the mirror, relize them drugs made you ugly now how does that feel?
knowin you failed to bring me down and at the same time you fell apart
while i kept it together, did my thing and walked away from the dark
and left all the pain behind and showed that i'm a warrior at heart

(Chorus)

(Verse)
Stood at the pier lookin at the water, lookin all around me
wonderin if i dove in and never came up who would of found me
almost gave it all up, my depression tried to drown me
but i fought it off, walked away, won't let emotions bound me
i stand up against the pain waitin for the world to crown me
i'm a champion fighter, throwin uppercuts and left hooks
knockout punches tryin to help you see that it's all beyond looks
you can think i'm weak from the shell but on the inside i'm strong
cuz you throw your best at me, but i always find the will to hold on
Dear Alan, Dear Justin, Dear Jesse, yall tried your hardest
i laughed at ya in the end cuz everything you tried was garbage
that bitch Brandi thought she was so hot she could make all men pass out
but take notice she was the only girl in my entire class i didn't ask out
Y'all was quick to laugh at Krystal, quick to pick on Tasha
quick to throw shots at me, everybody was so quick to gossip
talkin about other people's lives cuz all of yours sucked
mad at yourself cuz whatever you were doin nobody gave a fuck
so you had to find ways to make somebody else feel low
but i keep my head up high and tell them bullies where to go

(Chorus)

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Re: Atone The Underdog - Where Are They Now

Postby Strictt Ame » Apr 10th, '12, 20:30

Pretty dope read, I lost the flow at the end of the 2nd verse as the bars got longer but its text, who knows how your spittin it (pause)..story line was on point, good imagery

that bitch Brandi thought she was so hot she could make all men pass out
but take notice she was the only girl in my entire class i didn't ask out

^^That shit came across real nice, Im sure we all know a conceited bitch like that lol

Nice drop, keep it up
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Where Are They Now

Postby Atone » Apr 10th, '12, 20:53

thanx man
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Where Are They Now

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Apr 10th, '12, 22:37

Pretty good man I definitely see improvement from your past pieces that I have read so far. Keep it up.
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Where Are They Now

Postby mdemaz » Apr 11th, '12, 09:50

Haha, this was some funny shit.
Fuck all those motherfuckers.
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