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Eedee - A Shot to the Feed (Part II of Rude Awakening)

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Eedee - A Shot to the Feed (Part II of Rude Awakening)

Postby Eedee » Jun 5th, '12, 09:38

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=145818

Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6fXuEqHbb7w (Same as DGAF's 'Rude Awakening', this is my part of it)

[Verse] (:20)

After the amount of great feeds, now you say I'm awful, Geno?
I've found a way to strip the rhyming gene from off your genome.
Clearly you cannot see though what you're doing is hypocritical,
That shit you're pissing on goes in your cup to sip a little of.
Tough titties, you dip, get off - Menzo's dick is ridden
Enough by your sorry ass, 'ope! In goes his six inches.
And Geno groans in delight but it's painful at the same time,
Like when he writes his disses cuz he's in love with my great rhymes!
I like to sprinkle 'em around hither and thither,
If this rap game is a girl, then I feel big when I'm with her.
I dig in like splinters, cuz I'll get under your skin,
Must be from the wooden doll, I'll fucking plunder your diss.
I bet you slept with Mario, under the Seven Stars,
If you're a Legend then I'm aloft, up there, I'm heaven's art.
Who's off to the better start? Tip over your beverage cart,
How full is your cup now? Fuckin' pussy, I sever hearts.
Faggitus? Vos sunt perquam ridicula,
We'll see who's laughing now. A diss? Bitch, we'll school ya.
It's a shame really, you two are the fucking shit,
But that won't stop me and D' from ripping you two to fucking bits.
Hey there, just retarded, did you like those rhymes?
Internally, there he dwells, spare yourself, as times goes by,
We're only getting better and you're poor witnesses,
Cuz you motherfuckers skipped that we rhymed whole sentences!
God damn, that piece is fucking ridiculous,
Balls in your court, bleh... I'm fucking sick of this.
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