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Eedee - Put Your Money Where Your Mouth Is

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Eedee - Put Your Money Where Your Mouth Is

Postby Eedee » Jun 8th, '12, 04:31

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=145863

Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NLHkgW9C ... ure=relmfu

[Verse] (:22)

See, the problem is this, when you body our diss,
You call me awful, that's awful, because I'm awfully pissed.
Catastrophic's in the house, Ego needs some protection,
We're sliding up to the number one spot, how's that for succession?
Kiss your dying ass Goodbye, Geno, it's hard to save it,
You forget that my bars on that were your partner's favorite?
Oh and Menzo, you dysfunctional prick, I already addressed that,
In "Evil Genius", but you skipped that, I guess I already guessed that.
You ask your last girlfriend "Y?" and you got an ex-axe,
-is, soon for your group to post in CW you'll need a fucking guest pass.
It's funny you talk shit about my audio drops,
I don't see any from you two, man, I'm stopping your cocks.
Blocking 'em now... I'm rockin' you, how?
By sending you to your damn death and shoot your coffin like BLAOW!
So you're gonna kill me? Send my ass to my dad?
I'll send YOU something worse that'll make you crap in your pants.
Menzo taxidermied, your homie's face with skid marks,
And boy, receiving my gift is the only way you'll get props.
Maybe the only reason we ain't got any feed,
Cuz they're fucking speechless, jaws drop to feet.
Peace to lost cause, I'm kissing it adios,
Get your foot out your mouth, it's almost like you swallow toes.
If he's a sissy, that makes you the biggest cunt,
Menzo can fit his whole head up in there, ha, scissor fuck?
Fuck scissors, our words cut sharper than that,
The more insults you guys spew, the fucking harder we stab.
Your partner is bad, and that goes for each n' one of you,
Beef is nothing dude - just see the feet in front of you.
As you stumble and trip over my humblest quips,
Oh and Geno? My eyes are dryer than what you're tumbling in.
Last edited by Eedee on Jun 10th, '12, 05:12, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Eedee - Put Your Money Where Your Mouth Is

Postby J.R. » Jun 8th, '12, 05:21

Was there like 3-4 lines where the ends didn't rhyme.. Yeah..

Blaow
Dad
Pants
Marks
Props

Even if you have fucking amazing inners that's awful. I'll feed
More later. On my iPod atm,
But otherwise it looks solid.
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Re: Eedee - Put Your Money Where Your Mouth Is

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Jun 10th, '12, 04:29

I liked this piece a lot man it's good to see some more aggressive disses from you! And actually I can definitely see how those words rhyme^^^ I have been away from my computer and haven't seem many other disses but I hope they r up to par with this because then there would be some great disses going on! Nice job dude keeP the disses coming!
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Re: Eedee - Put Your Money Where Your Mouth Is

Postby mdemaz » Jun 10th, '12, 05:25

Eedee sounded pissed, what happen?
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Re: Eedee - Put Your Money Where Your Mouth Is

Postby Eedee » Jun 10th, '12, 05:29

mdemaz wrote:Eedee sounded pissed, what happen?


Just a little friendly beef to spark creativity and give CW some fun. :8)
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