Catastrophic - Eximius Vires

[Eedee]

Eedee's LoF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=146204
DGAF's LoF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=146228

*Last Catastrophic drop for a while. I'm headed down to a place with no internet for vacation till July 10th.

Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mHick0sm ... ce=message

Eedee
DGAF

I'm what happens when you leave reactor waste out to sit there,
I cut slackers, then I cleave the bastard's face. Now to think fair,
I dunno what I'm gonna do now, maybe I go and run through town,
Screaming at the top of my lungs that I punch rude clowns?
My wrists shoot mic cords that strangle and choke dyke whores,
I play games with my prey, facin' me, eh? Oh, high score!
when I throw stage stairs on top of old lady's grey hairs,
Then I go, "Say, where's ole' Give-A? Go crazy! Play fair!"
Ain't there any way to stop me when I'm transformed?
That's like stopping a power outage after a major sand storm.
I get my hands warm, I grip mics, and terrorize cities,
Spit my fire breath and look down: where are my titties???
Get a buddy and pair up, cuz I'm about to larrup you,
Once I get a hold of you faggots, don't think I won't tear up dudes!
When the game is in need of saving, fear no more, I'm heaven-sent,
I send away evil with the might of all my seven pens.

I'm chilling on the couch when in an instant shit went down
It was intense, I flipped around and saw some figure hit the ground
I'm tripping now, I went to scout the crash and saw a glowing light
I didn't know if I should go and pry or take my nose inside
So with an open mind I went to check the area I saw it fall
And there it was across the yard, I barely got the balls to call
To see if it responds at all, as moments passed the silence rang
With idol patience I remained, the quiet made my mind insane
I tried to wait but couldn't anymore, I had to take a chance
A naked glance showed a crazy plant in a crater packed
With ancient ash, then the plant sprayed a gas that made me sleep
Amidst the angst and crazy dreams remained a scene of painless peace
It seemed like days, or maybe weeks before I woke from out of slumber
Vision clouded, mouth was mumbling, all across the house I stumbled
Struggled to find balance somewhere, grabbing random furniture
My hands were turning purely clammy and my head was burning up
I'm feeling weird, and sure enough I think I'm levitating now
And so I hesitate, look down and see I elevate from grounds
Although I never made a sound, I'm thinking of that stupid flower
Shit, that's probably the crazy reason for my super powers

I've mastered my craft and with these powers I'll defeat
The wackest of raps, it must be magic how I fly on beats
And if I find you're weak I'll peep the style of another rapper
With super powers then shoot the coward with my fucking bat-gun
Nothing happens when you strike me down, it only moves me higher,
Quiet now you fucking mortal, found my rhymes, it's rude to light her
on fire, I laugh maniacal when the innocent go up in flames,
Skull-shaped stockings, you've been bad so with coal is how I stuff your brain.
I love the pain but I don't think you mean it, you just made it up
My laser gun will leave you laying once I make this place destruct.
I take the trucks grill-first, work skills until the bumper's up,
"This hurts!", the back wheels are all up in there, I've come to fuck.
Shit up like I'm an Iron Spider Man with a crazed demean-
-Or like a lady's scream with quaking knees, obliterating eighty streets.
And in between the crossfire of pop filters and laser beams
Our goals to chase a dream made us decide to make a team.

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

This was awesome guys! I like how both of yall got a verse then the last verse the back and forth was amazing! Anyway, both of you guys's vocabulary is crazy good, and the rhyme schemes are really nice, both of you guys have a lot of inners in this one! Great job! It sucks that this will be the last one for a while but hopefully both of yall will be writing on vacation and come back to rip it up! Have fun.

[mdemaz]

Great drop guys, you executed each punch nicely, awesome poetic elements, I really like the structure and flow too.

I really like the back and forth type shit too.