Bride of Frankenstein (Fiasco Day 4)

[Slim Fiasco]

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I looked up this old movie (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Bride_Of_Frankenstein) after I heard Lupe referring to it in one of his freetsyles (the Rap City one). Given the subject matter for today, I figured I can tell the story in rhymes.

A burning windmill, they thought the monster was dead
One of the villagers went down to check but ended up bad
He became part of the slaughter, exactly like his daughter
Got strangled by the hands that put his baby under water
The Monster’s creator was a person pursuing immortality
His name was Henry Frankenstein, the father of brutality
People thought that he died, but somehow he had survived
His body was brought back to his not-so-happy future wife
She was scared for his life after he met his former mentor
Who wanted another creation from the delusional inventor
This time a bride for the monster, but Henry wouldn’t do it
So they kidnapped his loved one and made him go through it
After her safety was assured, he completed the Bride’s body
Raised it through the roof and waited to surprise everybody
She became alive indeed, but she didn’t want to have no friends
It made the Monster hurt, she left him with nothing in his hands
So it rampaged through the laboratory, deciding to end the story
By letting Liz and Henry go, and shading a tear to show that it was sorry

[Mr.DGAF]

I like this. Liked the movie too, you did a really good job of making it easy to follow the story. Like I've said before, its tough to take a topic that limits what you can say and tell the story while making it rhyme. And you did that pretty well.

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Awesome piece dude, you executed the concept really well! its cool how you did the story telling and kept the flow and everything! nice.

[Slim Fiasco]

I like this. Liked the movie too, you did a really good job of making it easy to follow the story. Like I've said before, its tough to take a topic that limits what you can say and tell the story while making it rhyme. And you did that pretty well.

Thanks man! And I haven't seen the movie, but I think reading the plot on wikipedia is good enough. And yeah, it's definitely a challenge, though the good thing is that you have a story to follow, so it's easier when you know how it progresses.

Awesome piece dude, you executed the concept really well! its cool how you did the story telling and kept the flow and everything! nice.

Thanks bro, I appreciate that!

[Slim Fiasco]

You definitely pictured the movie events vivid enough for me to find the plot, I read the plot on the wikipedia page right after I was finished reading your verse and I felt like I was reading the same thing twice, your choice of words and your flow were pretty awesome on this one. awesome shit man.

Haha, thanks bro, I'm glad you liked it. This topic was out of my lane but I managed to do something. Today's one will be weird as well, lol. And have you heard that Lupe freestyle I mentioned? Shit is crazy.

[Slim Fiasco]

I just did, people like Lupe are the ones who make people like us lose hope in becoming a good rapper tbh, might as well not even try.

Hahaha, tell me about it man. If I wasn't rapping on my own language, I'd feel bad about writing in English, lmao.