The Nightmare Returns (Fiasco Day 4)

[Mr.DGAF]

This was an easy choice. I love horror movies, and the A Nightmare on Elm Street series is my favorite horror series, so I wrote about Freddy Krueger. Kinda funny, my first drop here was about Mr. Krueger. Also, lines are colored like this because that's the color of his infamous sweater. Plus I think it looks cool haha. Anyway, yeah, here ya go:

Beat: A Nightmare on Elm Street Hip-Hop Beat
Feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=146252



He tilted his brown hat and grimaced with a killer smile
Got his glove and whipped it out, said "You're all my children now!"
Then he frowned, contemplating on his actions and the past
See these parents hatched a trap and lit his ass with cans of gas
Facts were facts, and Freddy Krueger did some messed up shit
You see he slept with infant boys and would molest some kids
He can't confess to it, so he forced the kids to lie for him
Then one night they went and told the truth of what he tried on them
And that ignited sinful actions in the eyes of parents yearning
For revenge and so they did some shit that left apparent burnings
All along this monsters face, the craters pussed and oozed with slime
He felt his face and pushed the thoughts aside, it was Krueger's time
So he moved in silence, used maneuvers to subdue the minds
Of kids who proved they knew the crime's resulting from their youthful lies
The group had tried to stay awake for days because at night you see him
Deep inside your dreams he might be creeping with his knives for fingers
If you try believing that he isn't there he'll sever dreams and then
You'll know he means it when he says you'll never sleep again!

[Eedee]

Never seen the movie(s), but this is pretty cool. The coloring to match his appearance is pretty creative as well. I should probably see the movie to understand the intricate details you described, but nonetheless, I could picture him molesting those boys.

[Mr.DGAF]

Never seen the movie(s), but this is pretty cool. The coloring to match his appearance is pretty creative as well. I should probably see the movie to understand the intricate details you described, but nonetheless, I could picture him molesting those boys.

Haha, thanks homie.

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

AHAHA Damn dude! this was fucking awesome! I just watched the newer verseion of Nightmare on Elm Street and you nailed this right on the head man! and even kept great rhyming to go with the awesome concept. I loved this piece by you man! awesome

[Slim Fiasco]

I don't watch horror movies, but this was done with excellence. I like the color thingy, and the rhyming and flow were excellent. Great choice of words as well, I liked this as a whole.