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Eedee - On This Note

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Eedee - On This Note

Postby Eedee » Jun 22nd, '12, 01:40

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=146253

Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k0OHyPAGYOw

*Just something quick I made for you guys. I'm getting on a plane to leave to my grandparent's house in a few hours (with no internet :'( ) till early July, so I won't be on. So here's my parting gift, I guess haha. Enjoy.

[Verse] (:22)

I sit and stare at this page, a stern glare on my face,
I gave birth to these words but the parenting waits.
Where is my fate? I can't see over the steering wheel,
Dare me to chase my own hit-man so he stays at zero kills?
Being the hero feels underwhelming when compared to
Being the villain who razes buildings on a dare, whoo!
There, dude, it's so exhilarating, you writing this down?
What does anxiety feel like? Well I'm finding it out!
I'm eying this route, so many potions to drink,
That explodes me with emotions like an ocean of ink!
Big explosions in my stomach, my esophagus jerks,
This fucking vomit tastes like a mix of coffee and dirt.
Don't body my work, that makes me awfully hurt,
Scan myself butt naked to test how the copier works.
I drink soap and sneeze bubbles, honk those double D's,
This is my parting gift, I'll see you all in a couple weeks.
I know this doesn't make sense, a non-sequitur bar,
Like Barney Stinson with a girl jerking off in his car!
A blind date with piano keys, I'll leave you with this note,
I hate to have to leave, but I guess I'll see you when I'm home.
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Re: Eedee - On This Note

Postby Mr.DGAF » Jun 22nd, '12, 01:49

INVERSE. Found it. Anyways haha, good drop. The superhero line was my favorite, it flows so smoothly I had to check twice to see that it rhymed. Good stuff.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: Eedee - On This Note

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Jun 22nd, '12, 13:49

Awesome piece man, you kept the multis flowing through the whole thing while still gettig your point across!! Awesome dude! wil miss reading your pieces. Awesome job,

Also, where does your grandparents live??
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