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Undefined (Fiasco Day 5)

Postby Mr.DGAF » Jun 22nd, '12, 21:50

Tons of movie references in here, some of them may not be obvious. Anyways, enjoy folks. Also, no beat on this one. Didn't have the time to search for one.

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Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to your feature presentation
We'd be very grateful if you silence beepers, cells and pagers
See we'll let this major motion picture break the money records
It's a mix of funny sections spliced with tiny humping sessions
Starring One Direction getting butt molested by a flying dildo
Guided by the writing hero played by Ryan Reynolds
So make sure you buy your skittles, settled down and watch this flick
Which features me demolishing these bars like I was locked up in
A prison with no option if I'm acting nice to get the bail
While spending all my Darkest Knight's with Alfred like I'm Christain Bale
But this is not a fiction tale where shit is fixed by wishing wells
It's more like living in a hell while Little Nicky's chilling there
And if you missed that flick you'll fail to get my comedy
But I'll switch up the genre, we can get a mix of drama see
The problem Heath is that you broke you back atop the mountain's ledge
And now this Joker's snapped and overdosed, that's when we found you dead
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: Undefined (Fiasco Day 5)

Postby Slim Fiasco » Jun 23rd, '12, 13:24

Man, I have a headache so I'm just gonna quote name.

name wrote:That's pretty good man the references are crazy and I'm pretty sure I didn't get all of them, and the way you set them all up is pretty sick too, it all built up quite nicely. Great shit man.
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Re: Undefined (Fiasco Day 5)

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Jun 24th, '12, 17:34

damn dude this was awesome! I read it to a beat and it flowed great, I caught quite a few movie references in there which was awesome!! stayed great with the multis and executed the concept great! nice job dude!
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