The Showdown (Fiasco Day 6)

[Mr.DGAF]

Here's my day six piece. Hope you guys enjoy.

Feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=146279
Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Igte4IHgBlY&feature=youtube_gdata_player

Me: Red
Girl: Blue
Surprise Guest: Green
 
 
I told my girl it isn't her, it's me, I need some time to breath
Then suddenly she's crying "Please I can't believe you'd try and leave
Just think of sleepless nights when we'd--" "Uh-uh that's secret, keep it down
These people think we're creepy now you fucking sleezy cheating cow
I didn't mean to be this foul but bitch you know this kid ain't mine"
And then she's like "Did you forget the time we did it piggy style?"
"Piggy style? What the fuck is that" "That's when it's in my mouth
And then you rinse it out --" "Bitch that shit is foul and sacred too"
"Oh what, you think you'd screw my face then BOOM! It's on to lady two?"
So then I'm like "You're crazy Sue, believe that when that baby's due
I'll laugh right in your lady womb for sleeping with that Grady dude
And all while we were dating too" "I fucked up please, I lost my noggin
I forgot the offer when you told me that you wanted daughters"
"Sorry, but I'm being honest, now you've got this problem"
That's when Maury starts up "And the tests determine that you're not the father!"
"Sayonara, keep it real you fucking slut, I hate you bitch!
"Remember --" "If you hate her then why did you go and date the chick?"
"Because the brain was sick, and--" "Fuck the tests I know this kid is yours!
You think this shit will get ignored? I'm sick of stripping in the floor
To get some more financial help to pay for--" "What you think I care?"
"Well maybe we can see if there's a way to please the people here"
"Forget that shit, I need to bail! I simply can't afford this stress!"
And then I give Maury a check because he helped to forge the tests

[Slim Fiasco]

Hahah, nice one man, I loved it. The dialogs were executed perfectly, and good job with coloring the different roles. The rhyming was nice as well, and enjoyed this as a whole. Props.

[Arabian Shady]

Hahaha I actually laughed when Maury spoke lol
reminded me of a bit of "bad guys allways die & guilty conscious" probably because it has a bit of back n forth between characters as well.
Keep at it ma dude

[Atone]

this entire thing was bad ass and NEEDS to be recorded, great story telling and everything in this

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

ahaha shit man this was great, you executed everything perfectly, I guess I underestimated your story telling skills because this blew me away, great rhyming through the whole thing without losing the story/ concept and way to be humorous at the same time with the rhyming and flow! Awesome piece dude keep it up.