Testify (Fiasco Day 5)

[SG.]

Beat: Kanye West - Touch the Sky
LOF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=146294

Welcome to my movie, it's called "Friend of the Enemy"
I'm game for anything, so it's a documentary
Full of money, more money, hoes and pristine cars
It's gonna be shorter than the length of sixteen bars
Just kidding, it's not that cuz I'm not winning
It's depressing because I've done a lot of sinning
I'll be played by the kid that always plays an orphan
Throughout the film you'll always see me morphin'
From something I'm not now to something I always was
Moved so many lightyears, now they call me Buzz
You'll see me struggling against the tide of conformity
And plenty of sex scenes, I got the horns, y'see
Trying to be a rapper but it's nice to pretend
I ain't a fat fucker but I'll never be Slim
From the fostering years ago to the bullying I often got
These are the popular symptoms of a box office flop

[Atone]

Moved so many lightyears, now they call me Buzz

made me laugh as i was readin out loud, in a good way, cuz that was dope

more money, hoes and pristine cars
It's gonna be shorter than the length of sixteen bars

not sure what you meant but good rhyme

You'll see me struggling against the tide of conformity
And plenty of sex scenes, I got the horns, y'see

i read this in a relaspe accent i have no idea why but still, it sounded good

I'll be played by the kid that always plays an orphan
Throughout the film you'll always see me morphin'

what kid? either way, i like this

i enjoyed this entire peice from you, real good

[Slim Fiasco]

Haha, this was dope man, I loved that last line. I was planning to say something like that in my piece, but it didn't go that way when I started writing it. Good rhyming and some funny ish in there. The Buzz Lightyear reference was awesome.

[Mr.DGAF]

Haha, I liked the box office flop line. Obviously the Buzz line was dope too. And I loved that beat. I dunno, good piece man. I got it to flow right, the rhymes were pretty impressive. And there was a good amount of humor in it too.

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

HAHA damn this was awesome! you had some great word play in there! I loved the buzz light year line! great job awesome rhyming, way to go dude

[Arabian Shady]

haha That was pretty cool man, made it flow to the beat, witty set of rhymes. Definitely digg the piece.
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