49er Faithful (Fiasco Day 7)

[Mr.DGAF]

I get this may not be everyone's cup of tea, it pretty much revolves around my favorite team of all time; the NFL's San Francisco 49ers. Anyways, just wrote a quick 14 for it, enjoy.

Feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=146292

When it comes to my allegience I'm bleeding the red and gold
Set my sights on teams believing we're ceasing to get our goal
Get the rings and let the bling be set in stone, and the non-believers
Rest assured you're not to beat us, watching Randy Moss receiving
Passes after falling DB's grab at thoughts that they could stop
A crazy toss as Vernon Davis stomps along for 80 yards
And speaking of the 80's, God you know about the pass assualt
The Catch he caught to lauch our massive start; that's caused by Dallas Clark
As Joe Montana throws the fastest ball you've seen to Jerry Rice
He hauls the catch and barely tries to score for like the seventh time
It's very nice to witness greatness, and you know we're coming back
And even though the numbers stack against us we won't run from that
Now tell me can you stomach that? Cause damn we're sick and won't deny it
Answer quick! But don't defy the San Francisco Forty-Niners

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

I agree with Geno, the rhyming was awesome and the whole piece flowed smoothly, you executed the topic very well, Although I cant sit through more than 5 minutes of a football game I still thought this was a great piece! keep it up.

[Slim Fiasco]

I'm not familiar with the sport yet alone that team, but this was a great piece. As the others have said, the rhyming and flow are excellent. It's dope how you gave us a little team history lesson and made it all rhyme. Awesome job!