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Geno - Eulogy (Fiasco Day 10)

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Re: Geno - Eulogy (Fiasco Day 10)

Postby Mr.DGAF » Jun 28th, '12, 03:59

Haha I like this a lot dude. This line: "Nonsensensical syllables build your shitty flow" was fucking awesome to say. Good stuff man, it flowed perfectly and of course the rhymes are always impressive. This was nice, I like that you referenced the last drop you had too haha.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: Geno - Eulogy (Fiasco Day 10)

Postby Mr.DGAF » Jun 28th, '12, 04:44

Haha damn, I didn't even notice.
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Re: Geno - Eulogy (Fiasco Day 10)

Postby Sam. » Jun 29th, '12, 00:55

Loved this verse man, after ten days of writing,the level of skill that you bring most of the times seems to be there. Consistency, I like it.

Loved every aspect of it. I don't have anything to say, really. I've to appreciate your use of proper punctuation's at places. Keep it up, mole.
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