Lyrics Of Fury

[Atone]

i been studying inverses and multi's alot lately so this is sort of a new style i'm starting up with

(Verse)
Curtain's raising, my thirst is crazy to burst amazing
words to curse the haters,
you talk so much trash you wouldn't have a breath to exhale from an elephants chest
your a hell of a mess, let me spit the rest of the tale
i tell it the best, my confessions entail
how i fell from the nest, stood up and whiped my shoulders
you can tell i been blessed i have the fight of a soldier
on a mission to bomb ya, i'm stronger than competition, the opposition's a gonner,
this is an exibition that belongs in the definition of songs that
when you listen you hold on to, the meaning of what u heard
got you pressin play, and singing with the birds
got you dreaming like a nerd, screamin out the words
when i'm feedin the lyrics i'm a beast when you hear it,
feedin on your spirit, got you believin and you fear it-
when i bust these i crush g's you can't hush me
i thrust these so ugly you can't touch me
hate me, love me, only one that that can judge me
sits above me, so fuck you if you think i'm ugly
how lovely, you must be, jealous of what i got
what i rock, how i drop, i take it to the top
from the beginning of the riddle i get em spittin
when i spit em to the middle til i end em
with a little bit of sizzle to hit em with a mixture
of a little bit of everything that i give you
this aint just music to me this is everything that i live thru
and if you, got a problem with that
let's solve it on track, revolve it and call it a rap (that's a wrap)





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[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Aweseom job dude, I didnt think that you could rhyme like that! the multis were excellent, the lines are structured a bit weird but thats all good, some of the lines didnt make sense to me but thats my only complaint. way to go dude keep it up.

[Atone]

Aweseom job dude, I didnt think that you could rhyme like that! the multis were excellent, the lines are structured a bit weird but thats all good, some of the lines didnt make sense to me but thats my only complaint. way to go dude keep it up.

I'm, starting to post stuff i actually use for songs now instead of random, easy rhyme sheme styled stuff,

[Eedee]

There we go! I knew you could do intricate rhyme schemes and multis. This was great, loved it. All you need is to find a beat on Youtube or someplace and write to that, so that we can get the flow better and your structure will fall into place.

[Mr.DGAF]

This was definitely cool to read man. One of the better drops I've seen from you in terms of just rhyming. I liked it, good stuff. I struggled a bit on the flow on line three but that's probably just me haha.

[Atone]

i'm, workin on the last song for my next album and it's gonna have alot of this in the track, song is called "Drop Dead" and features a diss to King Gordy, unlike my last shot at him this one is not subliminal and i take a very direct shot at him, since he likes to call me out on Twitter and specifically name a track of mine to say it sucks, obviously he takes time to youtube me so obviously he's heard my music.

at first Gordy was cool and then he started actin like a bitch, fuck em tho, the entire song is not dedicated to him, just one or two bars

[Mr.DGAF]

GET HIM!

[Brendanoooo]

Most of the rhyming was good but i feel like some lines were too long and dragged out