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I Hate TR Shady

Postby Slim Fiasco » Aug 21st, '12, 21:10

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Ayo, this song is dedicated to all the bitchy members
All the bitchy members who have nice green names
And have no idea what it's like to be trolled as fuck

I feel like I'm posting without a proxy server
Logged in from three accounts, I'm no observer
Been here for two summers, seen Mods in tears
I hate 'em with a passion, my intentions are clear
Triple-posting on every damn thread page I open
My rage is staged and my words are cleverly spoken
You hate advertising? Well, I'm so glad to hear that
Kanye To The! Kanye To The! Are we fucking clear yet?
You made Heskey a vet, now Heskey is dead
And that's what happens when you keep my name in red
Going off topic? Motherfuckers, I'm going off forum
Taking name and dR3 with me - we the deadly quorum
I'm tired of getting warnings, just ban me already
But you can't type without me, you'll never be ready
I speak substance with emotions in infinite amount
And that's how Aftermathers loves to hack my account

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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby DƎRDYPK » Aug 21st, '12, 21:12

Slim Fiasco wrote:You hate advertising? Well, I'm so glad to hear that
Kanye To The! Kanye To The! Are we fucking clear yet?



reminds me of "here! double XL! double XL!" lol
good stuff guy :y:
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Slim Fiasco » Aug 21st, '12, 21:17

DƎRDYPK wrote:
Slim Fiasco wrote:You hate advertising? Well, I'm so glad to hear that
Kanye To The! Kanye To The! Are we fucking clear yet?



reminds me of "here! double XL! double XL!" lol
good stuff guy :y:


Haha, yeah, that's actually where I got the inspiration from for that line. :b:
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby J.R. » Aug 21st, '12, 21:19

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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Slim Fiasco » Aug 21st, '12, 21:20

Revolutionary wrote:Hahah, this was great.
And yeah, that reminded me of Double XL line, too.
Very well written and so true.

Why don't you wanna take me with you tho :(


Thanks man, hahah. Well, I definitely thought of you but name and dR3 have like the shortest names, and there's so much space in a line :'(

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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby EG. » Aug 21st, '12, 21:24

Loool, well done and funny as fuck.
The Hesky line reminded me of Tupac's "Huey" line. KTT ftw doe
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Slim Fiasco » Aug 21st, '12, 21:27

EG. wrote:Loool, well done and funny as fuck.
The Hesky line reminded me of Tupac's "Huey" line. KTT ftw doe


Damn, hahah, I knew that came from somewhere as well. :worship: My subconsciousness is playing tricks on me. :o And thanks!
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby the real slim shady » Aug 21st, '12, 23:02

:y:
dont have anything constructive to say that hasnt been said, it was good and i loved then
Kanye To The! Kanye To The! Are we fucking clear yet?
even though i dont really like ktt.... maybe just for the em reference.
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Guess_Who » Aug 21st, '12, 23:14

hahaha it was very funny. I love when people write things about the forum, we all can relate. Great Job SlimFi. :y:
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Eedee » Aug 22nd, '12, 03:32

This was funny, lots of Em influence concept wise. This idea had potential for some epic rhyme schemes, unfortunately you were lacking in that department.

Other than that, this was funny and a good read.
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Blu » Aug 22nd, '12, 04:47

I gotta say Hesky becoming a VET then leaving shortly afterwards was one of the dumbest things to ever happen.
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Eedee » Aug 22nd, '12, 04:58

InsaneTRex94 wrote:Lol this is great. Just wait "TRShady Yo" comes out though, I'm sure we can make something as good as this.


For sure. Find us a beat yet?
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Slim Fiasco » Aug 22nd, '12, 09:11

Menzo wrote:The beginning sounds a lot like "Rock Bottom" too.


That was intentional though, and I figured it was obvious with the intro and all. The other 2 lines were subconsciously inspired :D

@everyone else - Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it and I'm glad you enjoyed it. This was more of a freestyle verse i.e. a freewrite with no intention to do something special technically but rather to say ish about the site, and maybe to give you guys a laugh :b:
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby CrashBand » Aug 22nd, '12, 10:42

Slim Fiasco wrote:
Menzo wrote:The beginning sounds a lot like "Rock Bottom" too.


That was intentional though, and I figured it was obvious with the intro and all.

Not sure if serious.....or being sarcastic back
I'm not tryin to be rude, but I sincerely wanna fuck the taste out of your mouth
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Re: I Hate TR Shady

Postby Slim Fiasco » Aug 22nd, '12, 11:20

name wrote:Ahahaha this was pretty sick man and everything was spot on. Hilarious shit and its all on point, I'm surprised you're not banned yet though. :shifty:


Thanks man! And nah, they wouldn't dare, haha. :8)

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Slim Fiasco wrote:
Menzo wrote:The beginning sounds a lot like "Rock Bottom" too.


That was intentional though, and I figured it was obvious with the intro and all.

Not sure if serious.....or being sarcastic back


I was serious, and that's how I usually reply to sarcastic remarks.
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