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Eedee - "Just Having A Paddy"

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Eedee - "Just Having A Paddy"

Postby Eedee » Sep 21st, '12, 21:28

LoF

[Intro]
I ain't writing to a beat for this one.
I'm pulling an Atone...
Let's just get right into it.



[Verse]
Well fuck me, right? ... What's beef like?
I attack you, you're dead. We could chill but we fight.
Scratching my head, I read what this bastard just said,
I kill cuz the lights are so near that my rapping's ahead.
I put up my defenses cuz it seemed like a name drop,
You fuck with D-GAF? You'll get reamed till the day stops.
I'm not gonna lie, you each both had a shit verse,
I read that intro thinking "damn", only it gets worse.
I wrote a full length response but I waited to drop it,
There's no way you didn't diss us then he made it a cop out.
Exchanging words with JR in the thread that it seemed,
He really wanted to get fucked like he was ready to bleed.
Then you made the mention and it raised the tension,
Then I realized what you're saying I guess I didn't pay attention.
And now like magic I'm happy, the past is tragic, it's savvy,
What's beef, you ask? I dunno, I was just having a paddy.
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Re: Eedee - "Just Having A Paddy"

Postby Eedee » Sep 21st, '12, 23:48

bigray wrote:Wow that was really dope! From ur flow to rhyming easy 10/10...it was so easy to flow on this, it will work with any beat :y:

I hope to never have beef with u :(


You almost did :shifty:

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Re: Eedee - "Just Having A Paddy"

Postby Mr.DGAF » Sep 22nd, '12, 00:37

This was sick man, good stuff. Like you told me, I kinda interpreted it more so as their isn't any beef as opposed to a diss. The rhyming was killer, took me a few looks to find some of the ones tucked away. Loved the way the first line sounded, so smooth.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: Eedee - "Just Having A Paddy"

Postby Eedee » Sep 22nd, '12, 00:47

Mr.DGAF wrote:This was sick man, good stuff. Like you told me, I kinda interpreted it more so as their isn't any beef as opposed to a diss. The rhyming was killer, took me a few looks to find some of the ones tucked away. Loved the way the first line sounded, so smooth.


Thanks, pimp. :y:
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Re: Eedee - "Just Having A Paddy"

Postby Atone » Sep 22nd, '12, 07:02

There's no way you didn't diss us then he made it a cop out.

that part didn't fit rhyme wise but the rest of this was a nie lil shot, i aint mad cuz really your talented,

Then you made the mention and it raised the tension,
Then I realized what you're saying I guess I didn't pay attention.

this was good, no hate from me man keep doin your thing
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Re: Eedee - "Just Having A Paddy"

Postby Eedee » Sep 22nd, '12, 07:05

Atone wrote:There's no way you didn't diss us then he made it a cop out.

that part didn't fit rhyme wise but the rest of this was a nie lil shot, i aint mad cuz really your talented,

Then you made the mention and it raised the tension,
Then I realized what you're saying I guess I didn't pay attention.

this was good, no hate from me man keep doin your thing


If I recorded this it would've worked rhyme-wise. I can see what you mean though in text format.

Thanks for the feed. :y:
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Re: Eedee - "Just Having A Paddy"

Postby Atone » Sep 22nd, '12, 07:07

do not take my response litteral, as you said in one of your other raps, this shit is just fuckin around,
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Re: Eedee - "Just Having A Paddy"

Postby Eedee » Sep 22nd, '12, 07:37

bigray wrote:
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bigray wrote:Wow that was really dope! From ur flow to rhyming easy 10/10...it was so easy to flow on this, it will work with any beat :y:

I hope to never have beef with u :(


You almost did :shifty:

Thanks for the feed, guys.

I know...I am glad I didnt :y:


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