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Word for Word (Emulate Day 1)

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Word for Word (Emulate Day 1)

Postby Mr.DGAF » Oct 3rd, '12, 22:22

Here's my contritbution. Tried emulating every syllable as well as being coherent. Work in progress haha.

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I'm growing at light speed to rope-a-dope haters
That failed making major sells for the paper
Felt their lies then BLAM I swooped in, pad in hand
Clinging to the crown writing crazy good rhymes with plans
To runn, hip hop, please listen
While I spit you writtens jotted quick like scribbles
But no paper, no pen: taking
People with my art then I spark a picture all along
The canvas, fused God with man, just
Use rap and -- push hating aside, to set examples
For kids, then let the rest fall and set
Quite clever, I take the voice of Deck, respect him
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: Word for Word (Emulate Day 1)

Postby Eedee » Oct 3rd, '12, 23:25

Lol this was awesome. Good job at keeping it coherent.

So do people vote on the winner for the day and then they post a verse or what happens?
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