My song... tell me if its good or not

[sneekykiddo]

I wrote this after i broke up with my jerk ex-bf who alwayysss asks me to make out with him EVERY time, cheats on me, and im SICK of it.. [most] girls ARENT sluts


[color=darkblue]Little jerk, putting me down, throwin me round round
Like im your toy doll, Ima kill you now
FEEL me now, im enraged, my rage

[4D]

That`s very good, you one psycho chick though, someone is gonna get a dick chopped off if they fuck with you again!! Lol.

P.s You`re avatar is very cool.

[Sunni]

heh, it's no 'kim' but it's pretty good.can you rap good? you should record it and post it if you can

[sneekykiddo]

lol thanks fordie, i got the pict from somewhere on this site. Haha, and thanks for callin me pshyco lol. 8)

fry, ill try to get my track mixer fixed, coz wivout it i cant record songs... heh. :P then i'll try and post it up *if i figure out how to lol*

[V-DogDaMenace]

nice shit ryte der, probably we can work on a song 2gether ight?

[Vettori]

I must admit, Straight up, that was good, How long you been Writing for?
I honestly think more work, and practice could allow you To fullfill any dreams you have mind set, For me, I want to be That person, that walks on stage does concerts and fills the lives of millions, With happyness but yo, Honestly that was good,

And vdmenacedog, WOW man you have talent, i seen some of your stuff, AND wow, i wouldnt mind meeting you in person, I heard from a source ur only 15, You have alot man, email me, and tell me a bit about yurself please, mailto:Bdragon23@hotmail.com

"Faith"

[sneekykiddo]

Faith, ive been writing for 3 yrs, 1st and 2nd year still quite bad.. but here in the 3rd year im tryna improve more.... and v.. youre good, hit me up anytime..

[Tomega]

Inspired by "kim"
and flowed by a new Slim
propz