CanadaPure & Painkiller - Violated

[PAINKILLƎR]

illest shit out my nigguhs

LoF

[CanadaPure]
Kidnapped and ductaped this little faggot named PainKiller
I could murder or rape him, but I hate it I ain't killer
I think I'd rather eat his peter, put that in his asshole
I think I might need a heater, I'm about to shoot a sack full
Not even once either I'll give that scene roughly three sequels
Just to be evil and ether his butthole on each prequel
Painkiller is such a slut that he won a platinum plaque
But I grabbed it back, came on his face and smacked his ass
The solution to my problem's at the bottom of the bottle
His bottom is throbin' from the beating I've put on him
I might sound homosexual but dont dont forget he gave consent (Shhhh)
So when he gets bent it's equal till it's raining men
I cum I get up, light a cigar, smack him and its
Act over, get in the car, and put him back in the ditch
I'm not going to lie it's over and I started to cry
A good piece of ass like that's getting harder to find

[Hook]
Who needs dating when there's no escaping,
The raping I deliver and every day brings,
But Be careful what you wish for cuz you might just get it
And it'll come back and bite you in the ass just bet it

[PAINKILLƎR]
Woke up in a dark room at about noon
Could barely walk, I had a big ass wound
I remember it all, that faggot got me good
Did me like the flicks you'd see in Hollywood
Little did the faggot know I was VD infested
Raw dogged me without being protected (Hahaha)
Brained congested, thinking what else I'll plan to do
Cuz the shit ain't over til I completely fuck up this dude

[CanadaPure]

Ha, I might not be great Pain but that was a lot of fun to knock out with you!

[PAINKILLƎR]

Sure was man, I like it a lot tbh. We should do this again.

[CanadaPure]

It felt a little unfinished, mainly because of how PAINKILLER ended his verse. You guys obviously have a grasp at rhymes, CP's shown me some shit through PMs. It's exactly what I expected, I think I should have been invovled though, as I could have probably come up with some ideas that I've seen in some pornos. Overall it's pretty sick, Painkiller should have had a longer verse.

Also, Painkiller, there didn't seem to be enough syllables in the first two or three bars to keep it at a constant flow, the flow needed to be changed in each bar. At least for me. You fixed it nearing the end though.

But yeah, the three of us need to do something. And we also need to write a rap together.

If we hadn't been just knocking something out real quickly, we both had talked about extending his out a bit more with some back & forth shit which would have worked in a context like this too I think. Thanks for the feedback TRex.

[PAINKILLƎR]

It felt a little unfinished, mainly because of how PAINKILLER ended his verse. You guys obviously have a grasp at rhymes, CP's shown me some shit through PMs. It's exactly what I expected, I think I should have been invovled though, as I could have probably come up with some ideas that I've seen in some pornos. Overall it's pretty sick, Painkiller should have had a longer verse.

Also, Painkiller, there didn't seem to be enough syllables in the first two or three bars to keep it at a constant flow, the flow needed to be changed in each bar. At least for me. You fixed it nearing the end though.

But yeah, the three of us need to do something. And we also need to write a rap together.

Alright yeah I get you I was in a bit of a hurry and didn't but much effort in flowing at the beginning, and yeah we were talking about extending my verse but we went with the initial 8 bars we set out in the beginning. Thanks for the feed, and we def should make a song together all three of us.

[CanadaPure]

Back and forth could have really led to some twisted shit. Like the exact rape scene and how the two of you interacted.

What I think would have been interesting, would be a three verse structure laid out like:

1: Me, just the the kidnapping of Painkiller
2: Me and Painkiller, back and forth
3: Painkiller, just waking up and realizing I got a VD from him now.

[PAINKILLƎR]

We could have a remix with TRex with more detail/finishing it up or a part 2 with the ending and shit. What do ya'll think?

[CanadaPure]

We could have a remix with TRex with more detail/finishing it up or a part 2 with the ending and shit. What do ya'll think?

Who gets to yell: R-r-r-REMIX!?

[PAINKILLƎR]

We could have a remix with TRex with more detail/finishing it up or a part 2 with the ending and shit. What do ya'll think?

Who gets to yell: R-r-r-REMIX!?

lol who ever calls dibs on it. I'm outtie for today guys. Talk to you niglets tomorrow or something.

[LIL_B]

We could have a remix with TRex with more detail/finishing it up or a part 2 with the ending and shit. What do ya'll think?

Who gets to yell: R-r-r-REMIX!?

me brahauhbrha

[CanadaPure]

We could have a remix with TRex with more detail/finishing it up or a part 2 with the ending and shit. What do ya'll think?

Who gets to yell: R-r-r-REMIX!?

me brahauhbrha

Shit guys... He called dibs first.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Bump, Give my ***** CP some feed!

Who gets to yell: R-r-r-REMIX!?

me brahauhbrha

Shit guys... He called dibs first.

lmao he called it so I guess.

[Eedee]

That was a fun read haha. Of course the subject matter was obvious; it's CanadaPure hahahaha

Rhymes were okay, nothing mind-blowing. Flow was okay as well.

Good job.

[CanadaPure]

That was a fun read haha. Of course the subject matter was obvious; it's CanadaPure hahahaha

Rhymes were okay, nothing mind-blowing. Flow was okay as well.

Good job.

All it needed was a line like:

All bizarre do is drink fourties and smoke blunts,
Take off my ski-mask after I bust in your cunt,

And then maybe Eminem would hire us to be in D12

[CanadaPure]

was pretty dope, read pain's part in kdots voice for some reason

Pretty dope