User Rebellion

[J.R.]

Lof: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=152425

I'm not a revolutionist, rebellious foe,
I just tell the truth, about this hell we know,
drugs and sex, but we forget, we gotta grow,
let it rest, pick a desk, learn you hoes.
its unnerving though, nasty generation, nasty thoughts
Hurlin, "No more double penetration, it hurts me, stop!"
I oughta plop you down into a reformatory, leave you there,
you distraught at the thought of being without a D to share.
"geeze you so unfair" hey, I'm just honest, and on it, like kids and drugs.
"Spare some weed" thats demonic, kids and chronic, drop the bud,
"what" exactly, nasty, talkin bout "ratchet" and "yolo swag"
come at me, if anyone attacks thee you say, "I know you mad"
fag, can barely cross your T's or dot your I's.
Sigh. You lost in trees, fighting for legalization rights,
its alright for these people who use it wisely,
but kids using weed? pills? maybe they do it just to spite me,
please believe, I'm not startin no fights seen? just listen for a sec,
seize control of your life, fore you're left with missin intellect,
By now you've assessed this is the same dialect I preached,
well I guess the human mind takes 4 times to learn, re-teach.
and kids stay off the mean streets, whores and you just don't connect,
free yo-self from the wreck. I'm done. leavin you perplexed.

[EvryOnesACrtc]

This was really lyrical. Packed with rhymes. I liked the message, but was definitely lost the majority of the time reading it. The random phrases just really caught me off guard, and it seemed kind of repetitive.

You're definitely getting a lot better. Improving with every drop. Next time, pick a more interesting topic though.

[J.R.]

Alright, I'll try. Thanks for the honest feed.

[Kill You]

This was really lyrical. Packed with rhymes. I liked the message, but was definitely lost the majority of the time reading it. The random phrases just really caught me off guard, and it seemed kind of repetitive.

You're definitely getting a lot better. Improving with every drop. Next time, pick a more interesting topic though.

I agree with this post. I respect lyrical shit a lot though so I do give props.

[J.R.]

Bump.

[Sam.]

I can't believe this is the same JR who was so mocked last year. This is great stuff, man.

[J.R.]

I can't believe this is the same JR who was so mocked last year. This is great stuff, man.

Thanks dude!