Frankenstein's Monster

[Kill You]

Yeah
Who knew I could be trapped by you
Wrapped me into a rap balloon
Sent me up in the air tonight, motherfucker that's my tune
Just like Phil, I saw what you did
So I'll take this chainsaw to you bitch
Rip you into six pieces and I'm not even finished
Shit, I'm out my motherfucking mind
I'll moon you and leave you blind
Then proceed to soothe you with my rhymes
Bitch, it's my time so I just dropped the beat
Oops, I'm sorry it landed on your head boo, what a story
I'll tell this rap game to suck my dick through a glory-hole
Like a Shorty-hoe, quick to lick the ink off my pen before I pimp slap her like it's the Maury Show
Nah, you ladies should know I'm just playing
It's a result of all the pain, stress, and should I mention cocaine?
I'm kidding about that too, boo, shit how will you ever know when I'm telling the truth?
Bitch, it's only when I'm yelling at you for selling my booze
Look what you've created, call me Frankenstein's monster
And you're the good old doctor taking out my heart
This time I'm not faking it, I'm wasted, sick and falling apart
Stalling this shit before I bust
No such luck, slut, you'll take all of my cum from the tip of my dick, hun
My balls are numb now, too bad we skipped out on her fun but I'm a sick one
Now that I got my nut, just leave me be
I'm so sorry that I can't see a future with sleez

This is one of the earlier ones but I like it. I really liked the Phil Collins reference I made.

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[CanadaPure]

Dude you gotta post Links to previous feedback you've given people for each one of your songs or else they'll all get locked.

[EvryOnesACrtc]

Lol I'm really digging your stuff. It's kinda like rambling rap, but, at the same time, I can tell you put thought into the rhymes. It kinda reminds me of Em's "Step Right Up" lol keep postin', man, cuz I'll keep reading!

[Kill You]

Lol I'm really digging your stuff. It's kinda like rambling rap, but, at the same time, I can tell you put thought into the rhymes. It kinda reminds me of Em's "Step Right Up" lol keep postin', man, cuz I'll keep reading!

Yeah that's what a lot of my raps are, random thoughts and everything. I'll be at work or school and just think of random shit lol. I see why my rhymes could remind you of Em, I often use a similar flow for most of them. Which is actually something I need to stop because it's getting kinda repetitive.

Started to write a rhyme to a beat last night, really taking my time with it. I only have like 8 bars so far lol.