Geno & CanadaPure - Voices

[CanadaPure]

Geno LOF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=153988&start=30#p2113277
CP LOF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=153988&start=15#p2112727

Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=pl ... iynS5B-Z1o

Geno
CP

[Verse I]
I'm hangin' to the side, but I'm stranglin' a guy,
I'm dangling' his life, and I'm begging him to die
Hes facing to my right, get his face away from mine!
I'm anxious, is it time? To waste a case of rhymes?
I say it aint tonight, but I cant wait to taste the lines,
I hate to say it's nice, but I'll make him stay to fight
I break the strangle bind, but I pushed him to the ground,
Geno rushed to him, now he's smushin' his head out
With my foot crushin' his mouth I could hear his jaw break,
All faith he had in survivin' died when I stomped face,
What an awful fate, his last seconds praying to his god
Saying that it's not the end, decaying in his thoughts,
Let's go lay 'em in the sod, dig a hole for this nitwit,
A big pit, whip his corpse in and then fill it,
With victims we've sicked, killin' 'em is our business,
Let's fin-ish with the little bitch that he lived with.

[Chorus]
The voices in my head are throwin' signs that always point to death,
I can feel a strange power where my joints connect,
I'm a puppet to what is up in my mind now,
(PIPE DOWN) Ugh, I suffer so much I could die now...
Minds a blank canvas a free man, guided by a cancerous demon
I've transferred deceit and now my own hands are misleaded
I am just a mask for a higher up, but I wish it'd last
Lose complete grip at last to perform the sickest tasks

[Verse II]
Geno and I hopped up into my old Dodge truck,
It's odd luck that this shitty truck got stuck,
At the broads, yup, pop up the trunk,
Saws ain't enough, we gotta shock her, my gut's awfully hungry,
Must we.. sneak in so quietly every house?
I'ma be hella loud, violently yellin' out
I can see her right now, ducking behind the curtins look,
She's sure been shook, Geno go make sure she's hurtin' good,
I approach her with a knife, only jokin' as I smile,
Hopin' that she cries, mopin' while my homie gets her tied,
I'm strokin' on her thighs, almost goin' on inside,
She shows her vocal side even knowing it ain't right,
Chokin' her throat tonight is the only way to be doing it,
Go and make any movement and slow and painful's the future, bitch
The abused chick made a swift movement and scratch my face
It's back to basics, she's done when I unlatched my blade

[Chorus]
The voices in my head are throwin' signs that always point to death,
I can feel a strange power where my joints connect,
I'm a puppet to what is up in my mind now,
(PIPE DOWN) Ugh, I suffer so much I could die now...
Minds a blank canvas a free man, guided by a cancerous demon
I've transferred deceit and now my own hands are misleaded
I am just a mask for a higher up, but I wish it'd last
Lose complete grip at last to perform the sickest tasks

[Verse III]
Take half an Ativan to deal with stress I'm havin happenin'
Our past is blackenin', I see Geno and his ass is blabberin'
Half a dozen stabbin's? It doesn't matter, this stuff will add up,
Soon we'll suffer bad when the fuzz have gathered the guns we've scattered,
Enough dumbass chatter, if you could have held that minimal whore down,
I wouldn't have torn out her lungs, we're headed to criminal court now,
When I was kickin' the door down, I coulda used a little bit of help,
Instead you let her dial the cops, you really did it now!
My fault? You gonna back stab me? Feel free to try, have at me!
I'll stand glady, as I am bleeding from my glands madly,
You mad? Then dash at me! C'mon, don't make me make a hit!
I never shoulda made the switch to you instead of Alieus
Uncovered my razor, blitzed at Geno swinging like crazy,
Hit him like eighty times but he managed to knife blade me
With a sliced trachea and my weapon up in his stomach,
We fell in puddles of blood and then rested stuck in a slumber

[Blu]

Some lines were obviously influenced by Eminem. The piece is alright, I've seen this type of content too many times on this site. Start thinking of topics outside of the "murder" and "mutilation" category.

[PAINKILLƎR]

This was great, I really loved it flowed great. You guys worked extremely well together. It's kinda tough seeing my partner working with another man... Maybe Menzo can't relate to how I'm feeling. Great drop though guys.

[Just Silver]

liked the back n fourth reminded me of the tourney

didnt really get a catch for the chorus or a definite flow

overall its a good read CP surprises as well

[Sam.]

Technically awesome, content wise boring. Sorry, but that's how I feel. It reminded me of an older piece by Ego. It started off in a very abstract way, but then.... The ending was flat and not like how Geno usually ends it. It definitely had it moments, but still, could have been better.

[CanadaPure]

Yeah if you look at the background of this its not really surprising that it had shortcomings. It was a completely spontaneious collab that was done on the spot. Still turned out good.

[Sam.]

Technically awesome, content wise boring. Sorry, but that's how I feel. It reminded me of an older piece by Ego. It started off in a very abstract way, but then.... The ending was flat and not like how Geno usually ends it. It definitely had it moments, but still, could have been better.

It was just random for fun lol. We weren't trying to make something amazing, so I definitely get where you're coming from. You're right.

but it was just writing for fun so that's why it's like that.

That's the key. Enjoy what you write.

[Eedee]

I loved this. You guys have natural chemistry and you continued each others thoughts and schemes perfectly. Dope!