Just Silver X bigray - New Chemistry

[Just Silver]

I loved both verses of urs....flowed very well for me with or without a beat.

I think we have some chemistry here and looking forward to writing with u again.

thanks guy only prob is that one line before old school got deleted lol so the flow at the end is off but otherwise its somethin nice

[Just Silver]

Its is there now....sorry bro...it was real late and I was burnt out lol

same here lol understandable

[Just Silver]

Join the new Tourny?

idk maybe i just finished doin the official won and lost so im sorta rehabilitating lol lol

but the new sig sounds good

[Ka0t1c]

i didn't think u guys meshed, i was not feeling the verses from bigray at all, just silver kept me wanting to read it, otherwise i would've just left

[RoleModel'Est96]

Obviously don't know much about this but really liked every verse, esp bigray's last verse.

[Just Silver]

i felt bigrays second verse is alot stronger than his first

gotta remember this is basically practice

[Ka0t1c]

personally, i hope to see bigray on a mature level or at least lyrical

[Just Silver]

thanks for the feed guys pt.2 on the way

[Ka0t1c]

well son of a bitch and son of a bitch, doesn't help for rhymes


keep it original

like these lines were your best ones imo


It aint no differen' get smoked out like cigarettes’
Im buckin’ at citizens I’m fucking with business men

maybe have a topic for a good story

that will help you stand out otherwise you will be left in the dust

[Sam.]

Just Silver just played around with the Rhymes of Org. What the fuck?

[Sam.]

I'll get to that. I just want answers from him. Don't worry, I never leave a thread without leaving proper feed.

[Just Silver]

Just Silver just played around with the Rhymes of Org. What the fuck?

what ?

[Sam.]

Your rhymes sound familiar to the original song.

[Just Silver]

Your rhymes sound familiar to the original song.

i know lol well my first verse

[CanadaPure]

Was alright. I think both of you still have a lot of growing to do as far as writing goes, but it wasn't bad. Bigray, I'm seeing lots of improvement from you and that makes me happy because I know how much you like writing. Can't speak much on silver, because I haven't seen much of his writing. But it was decent.