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Re: bigray - quick 16

Postby SoldierShady » Feb 28th, '13, 15:34

Eminem is better than you. :shifty:
"So one last time, I'm back, 'fore it fades into black and it's all over, behold the final chapter in the saga, trying to recapture that lightning trapped in a bottle twice, the magic that started it all...tragic portrait of an artist tortured....trapped in his own drawings..." - Bruce.

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Re: bigray - quick 16

Postby Just Silver » Feb 28th, '13, 15:42

pretty good improving guy lately its almost like a whole new style

short and sweet thought u were gonna use blu ray for word play with u and Blu that woulda been cool

checkout "Tramadol" when possible or "Writing everyday" my first song of 2013
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Re: bigray - quick 16

Postby Slim Fiasco » Mar 1st, '13, 18:52

Nice stuff man, first thing I noticed the structure is really good. I like that, keep it up!
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