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Angels and Halos

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Angels and Halos

Postby CrashBand » Mar 10th, '13, 12:29

My dad is a Jew but my mother's a Catholic
I chose her religion, and she's fuckin' ecstatic
But she wanted me to follow the bible sincerely
I tried but I barely spent time at a hearing
On Sunday, I'd rather do anything else
She kept saying "Go, ‘cos the penalty's hell"
Mum’s nagging then started to get on my nerves
Banned T.V, 'cos I'm liking stuff better than Church
My dad realises I’m not the heavenly sort
All he ever wanted is for me to never eat pork
Then I died.. it turned out she'd been right all along
God’s real and I wish I’d been righting my wrongs
I asked if there’s a way I can get into heaven
He said "no way in hell you will ever be let in,"
People warned me, but I thought that they were mistaken
Oh well..... I can finally eat bacon..... with Satan

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I'm not tryin to be rude, but I sincerely wanna fuck the taste out of your mouth
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Re: Angels and Halos

Postby CrashBand » Mar 10th, '13, 23:49

Jews aren't allowed to eat pork because of their religion.

Catholics can, but this person wasn't allowed to because his dad didn't let him.
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Re: Angels and Halos

Postby tadpole25 » Apr 9th, '13, 12:15

simple and easy to follow along, but good storytelling, classic. overall well done.
"I take yall diss as endearment - I love it when I hear it
Maybe words offensive - free speech I don't fear it
Maybe music can take us to a place so atmospheric
Beyond our greatest imagination, illuminatin' experience
If we open our ears and close our inhibitions, it's clear"
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Re: Angels and Halos

Postby Halftongue Dre » Apr 11th, '13, 07:52

Well you got talent thats for sure
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