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Re: bigray - Smoke Up

Postby 12characters » Apr 22nd, '13, 16:09

Dude honestly you should rap more. You have a better grasp on your flow than your structures indicate and you sound confident enough on the mic to give it a serious go.

Plus, gangster shit was meant for audio anyways.
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Re: bigray - Smoke Up

Postby Spyder » Apr 22nd, '13, 19:20

Still improving with every piece, just make sure you don't say things just to rhyme.
"Plot schemes all night like wet dreams." As far as I know dreams don't plot schemes.

It all rhymes now, but don't say things just cause it rhymes.

Also, how does 12 know how confident you are on the mic? Do u have audio or am I missing something...
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Re: bigray - Smoke Up

Postby 12characters » Apr 22nd, '13, 19:25

Spyder wrote:Still improving with every piece, just make sure you don't say things just to rhyme.
"Plot schemes all night like wet dreams." As far as I know dreams don't plot schemes.

It all rhymes now, but don't say things just cause it rhymes.

Also, how does 12 know how confident you are on the mic? Do u have audio or am I missing something...

He posted a track, but it's not there anymore.
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Re: bigray - Smoke Up

Postby Spyder » Apr 22nd, '13, 19:30

ohhhhh i was like wtf

whyd you remove it Ray
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Re: bigray - Smoke Up

Postby Francesco » Apr 23rd, '13, 13:31

You're improving every other time homie... :y: I like this one.
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