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Geno - It's Over (Freestyle)

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Re: Geno - It's Over (Freestyle)

Postby Just Silver » May 26th, '13, 17:36

Very different i liked the pausing style and beat choice shouldnt matter as much as lyrics no matter what imo

Nice short and sweet and the time in which you stated helps the flow

I need to write ASAP good shit guy
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Re: Geno - It's Over (Freestyle)

Postby CanadaPure » May 26th, '13, 18:43

Pausing on a beat? Kid wants to be Bizzy.
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Re: Geno - It's Over (Freestyle)

Postby Sam. » May 26th, '13, 20:05

Structured it pretty good. Nice shit.
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Re: Geno - It's Over (Freestyle)

Postby Francesco » May 26th, '13, 22:53

Nice drop homie! :y: You've been working hard as of late! :worship:
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Re: Geno - It's Over (Freestyle)

Postby CanadaPure » May 27th, '13, 01:36

I'll give some actual feedback now since last time all I did was joke. First, I actually like the beat and think it's pretty unique sounding. It's gritty, I like that in a beat.

The writing style itself was incredibly unique, I liked it a lot. The rhyming and technical aspects were all on point, but it was also a lot different than your usual. Really cool overall!

We need another piece together soon.
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Re: Geno - It's Over (Freestyle)

Postby CanadaPure » May 27th, '13, 02:20

Geno wrote:Word, I agree with all points.

PM me with an idea / beat?


I've been looking. I just can't find anything that really sparks my interest lately. :shakehead:
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Re: Geno - It's Over (Freestyle)

Postby Atone » May 30th, '13, 17:17

That beat is meh, i could picture this on a more rock style beat, something similar to a "Lose Yourself" type beat mixed with some Hollywood Undead Rock style

the lyrics were good tho, very fun to flow to, very well written
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