Pain X Bigray X Silver - Bars

[Sam.]

Decent. Silver killed it in all the aspects. Bigray and Pain need to works on their flows; especially pain. Pain, work on your structure. Try not crumble too many words in a bar, throws the flow off a bit. Try and practice poetry. Helps in: Structure, phrasing, etc, etc. Content was alright for err'bdy. Bigray's 1st verse was a little random, looked like you just wrote to the end rhymes you had written earlier. Don't be mad, that's the general feel I got. Overall, nice drop. Nice chemistry, mixing da bars was a good idea. Nice continuation, a little off at times, but that okay.

[CanadaPure]

@Sam, Pains bars were pretty much the same in length as Bigrays or Silvers. I don't get what you mean by cramming words.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Decent. Silver killed it in all the aspects. Bigray and Pain need to works on their flows; especially pain. Pain, work on your structure. Try not crumble too many words in a bar, throws the flow off a bit. Try and practice poetry. Helps in: Structure, phrasing, etc, etc. Content was alright for err'bdy. Bigray's 1st verse was a little random, looked like you just wrote to the end rhymes you had written earlier. Don't be mad, that's the general feel I got. Overall, nice drop. Nice chemistry, mixing da bars was a good idea. Nice continuation, a little off at times, but that okay.

You say this as if my structure and flow is always off... and the structure on this wasn't even bad, my flow is smoother than a baby's ass.

[Sam.]

Yes, indeed they were. They managed with proper multis, which was not perfect in his verse. I think he was trying to be verbose.

@BR: I experienced very less problem with your verse. I've kinda know you accent, but the phrasing gave me trouble. Don't worry it's not a big thing to worry about. It was just slight problem that I needed to point out.

[Sam.]

I'm sorry. Thanks for opening my eyes, homie.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Yes, indeed they were. They managed with proper multis, which was not perfect in his verse. I think he was trying to be verbose.

Literally one fucking line is too long and that fucks up the whole structure and flow? lmao please, WOAT feed.

[Sam.]

Take it and live with it, pal.

[CanadaPure]

Take it or live it, pal.

Just for future reference Sam, the saying you're looking for is "Take it or leave it".

[Just Silver]

thanks for the feed guys this came out nice

[Sam.]

Not exactly what I was aiming for. Fucked up eerthang today. Sorry folks. Might as well re-feed tomorrow. I'm just waiting for a call from abroad, then I'll go and sleep.