bigray - get fucked up

[Francesco]

I love your hustle & consistency...
This structure was too hard for me to bare with even though I saw what you're trying to do with that double rhyme in the middle of the lines. It's probably just me but I couldn't figure out a way to make it work... Yet I still found more than few nice lines that stood out for me!
Keep it up little homie!

[Just Silver]

Rhyming was on and off and some lines threw me off Lilke

" I’m certified so versatile home boy other shit no
fertilize
“Take your bitch” you’re like “gimme’ that back, I’m
Chinese so I never had that”
Flow was hard but possible


The ending flowed well

Keep it up just try different content i need to as well

Overall 6.7/10

[Snakebeast]

I thought the structure was fine, honestly. And it took me a second, but if you apply a Yela-esque flow to it....it's AWESOME.

Im certified so versatile home boy other shit no fertilize
“Take your bitch” you’re like “gimme’ that back, I’m Chinese so I never had that”

Especially love how the second line flows.

In the game like Madden is, I wrap shit up like bandages
And smoke these rappers like cannabis, than flip the track and dismantle it
Half the days I smoke herbs, stick with the rhyme flow there ain’t no cure
No magic times I ain’t go get hurt, imma’ lyrical pyro your rhymes get burnt

Good structuring and rhyming here.

Normally, I'd bag on this for being practically grammatically retarded, but first, it's rap, and secondly, it's obviously a laid back party song, so I'll let it slide.

The imagery works, some parts are funny, and I could legitimately rap this inside my head.

7.5/10

[SliK]

Bigray we gotta collab sometime. This piece wasn't my favourite from you but it's great to see you trying something new. That's what I like most about this, you switched up your style. I really liked the certified/versatile line, it flowed really well and just sounded dope.

[Sam.]

I would say only one thing: Change your direction and try something soft and peacefull. I know this style is your forte, but I'd love to read a comic/love type of shit from you.