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I totally like this one... the structure is on point & there are some nice lines. I like the way you flip rhymes & the rhyming overall. This one is NICE!
Structure wasn't a problem here at all, you managed it well. You've a west-coast style of presenting your thoughts. I don't know if you could relate to what I'm saying, though. Let's say it was more gangsta. Good, I like it. Flow was proper. This is mass improvement. Keep it consistent, my friend.