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Bigray - Number One (shots fired pew pew pew)

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Re: Bigray - Number One (shots fired pew pew pew)

Postby Sam. » Jun 14th, '13, 22:13

That was plain awesome. Nice and sweet. Keep it up.

Could have been more aggressive at times
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Re: Bigray - Number One (shots fired pew pew pew)

Postby Sam. » Jun 14th, '13, 22:15

Yeah, I forgot to ask, what does it mean?
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Re: Bigray - Number One (shots fired pew pew pew)

Postby Sam. » Jun 14th, '13, 22:27

Okay! I thought it stood for something more significant. Cool
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Re: Bigray - Number One (shots fired pew pew pew)

Postby Francesco » Jun 15th, '13, 01:35

This is the best structured piece I've seen from you... there were nice lines but there were some not good too. The flow is fucking smooth... Well done little homie! :y:
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Re: Bigray - Number One (shots fired pew pew pew)

Postby Just Silver » Jun 15th, '13, 02:56

Was that autism line towards me lol

But overall a fun read i like pieces like this cause i can search for each diss and such

But all i could find was crash and possibly me for the shots fired
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Re: Bigray - Number One (shots fired pew pew pew)

Postby Sam. » Jun 15th, '13, 20:07

Just Silver wrote:Was that autism line towards me lol

I think so. :shifty:
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Re: Bigray - Number One (shots fired pew pew pew)

Postby Atone » Jun 15th, '13, 21:19

I'm starting to take you more serious, you've gotten better than before
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