Bigray ft. Geno - Titans

[CanadaPure]

Geno I liked more, bigray you bit 3am lol

[Sam.]

Both the verses managed to hold my interest equally. It's hard to say who was better.Flow wise bigray did wonder, so did Geno,( even though Geno's end rhymes in the 1st couplet didn't click easily for me). I'd liked it even better had both of you wrote something down the same line, but that just me. A hook of your own would have added more to the final outcome, though. Bigray did step up his game for this, and that's what I like the most about this collab, tryin to match up to the calibre of your partner. Dope Collab.

[Mr.DGAF]

Genos verse was quite good. Tons of rhyming and some clever lines. I like that the switched up your style a but recently, good stuff.

Ray you had a solid verse too. Some cool lines, the beginning couplet was impressive man. Against geno you got outshined a bit, but like I said, his verse was quite good. Yours was right up there with him, just work on adding a bit of complexity to your bars now.

[Squiggles123]

In fact, this ain't horrorcore but I caught four whores by the corridor
I called the coroner, said “some hoes dead on da’ corner floor”

Loved this, definately inspired by 3 a.m intentional or not haha. I always am influenced by what i've been listening to recently (almost always Eminem). Would love some advice on writing a cohesive piece, I write A LOT of lines and punch lines but struggle to sit and write something cohesive like this.

[Spyder]

Both verses were complete opposite ends of a topical. Geno was spitting about actually being a titan, while bigray just spat about essentially being a beast. Geno had some nice imagery and line rhymes. Though some lines were stretched and the imagery kinda felt corny at times. Ray did it alright but kinda simplistic. Really nothing special in that verse but again, not bad.

Problem here was synchronicity, so whoever joined the collab, that's on you lol

[12characters]

^it's close enough tbh. Sometimes spitting the exact same verse (with different perspectives/styles) isn't what people want to do/hear.

I'm talking about content in general though. Not judging these verses.