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David Hasselhoff

Postby Atone » Jun 29th, '13, 06:55

i got very bored, and for some reason, started to think of random rhymes and ended up playin around and writing this, not meant to be serious at all

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Writin music, feel like the passion's lost
people laugh alot, like i'm david hasselhoff
i just flip these bastards off, they aint gotta axe to toss
wait a minute, thats a thought, so while i'm sittin here listenin to asher roth
jackin off, i cast a plot, start to jot a line
OH MY GOD I LOST MY MIND, writin awesome rhymes
lost in time, zonin out like i'm floatin away
i write about worshippin satan while other's hope and pray
i sit alone in my room and write these notes that say
i can't cope okay...grab the rope to play
wrap it around my throat like HEY
maybe people will stop laughin if i just go away
wait a minute...nope, okay, so it broke i'm safe
great, now i gotta here the jokes they say
wishin i never awoke today
stick my head in the tub and soak my face
then i realize, it's time to open my eye's, i'm a genius
fuck how have i never seen this?
when i write it's like a novel i'm marvolous
mr. fabolous amazing the way i'm carvin this
writin my hardest hits, like an artist, shit
i pull my notebooks out the garbage pit
i'm so fuckin glad i started this
i even wrote a song about heartless sick, retarded bitch
where's my microphone? i gotta put this to a beat
stir up some emotions when i put this to the streets






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Re: David Hasselhoff

Postby Eedee » Jul 3rd, '13, 05:38

Thank you for prefacing the verse as a fuck-around verse. And for that, I like it. Lovin' the rhymes.
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