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Re: Bigray - Call me Slick

Postby Eedee » Jul 21st, '13, 17:14

Lol this was fun bigray. good job!
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Re: Bigray - Call me Slick

Postby Eedee » Jul 21st, '13, 17:28

bigray wrote:Thanks Eedee I appreciate it :y: Im glad you enjoyed it dude.


Im sorry we beefed in the past, can we let that be bygones or whatever? youre cool. CP loves you. I love CP. he mus tknow something I dont. WHY CANT WE BE FRIENDS (like the song? YA KNOW)
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Re: Bigray - Call me Slick

Postby Eedee » Jul 21st, '13, 17:38

bigray wrote:Its done bro all gone and was fun while it lasted I guess. I apologize to for being a jerk sometimes as well man...I know I say things I shouldn't and I usually don't mean them.

I'm down let's be friends :y:


i fucking agree and its not even the fucking whiskey talking man

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Re: Bigray - Call me Slick

Postby Eedee » Jul 21st, '13, 18:07

no problem broham.

im eating a ham sammich. no women allowed lololol
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Re: Bigray - Call me Slick

Postby Snakebeast » Jul 21st, '13, 18:29

Old fashioned Wayne style similes. Sometimes annoying as fuck (you come first like the letter A?).

On the other hand, you have some HILARIOUS lines

You like bongs? Here suck my left nut and smoke it in a bowl
Actually leave my balls alone, here I’ll give you a clone


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Overall, great diss :3
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Re: Bigray - Call me Slick

Postby CrashBand » Jul 24th, '13, 15:55

You like bongs? Here suck my left nut and smoke it in a bowl
Actually leave my balls alone, here I’ll give you a clone

Yeah, that was on some Lunar C ish.
I'm not tryin to be rude, but I sincerely wanna fuck the taste out of your mouth
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